lol Misty is a pervert.

I am so glad I'm not the only person who has ever thought that this could be a possible pairing.

I loved the plot twists...Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

Call yourself Lady Abomination.

There isn't an actual story? At all? I mean it started kiiiinda okay but then? Everything else came out fucking garbage. And here I was actually excited to see this pairing. Ugh

please continue

Ehhhhhh no es justo quiero continuar disfrutando devtu fic! Onegaiii vuelve con más!

I will never know the appeal of yaoi.. maybe its a women thing. Just like we like to watch lesbians ..meh!

Please update soon!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOOOOONNNN

WHYYYYYY I REALLY LOVE THIS IT'S A VERY GREAT STORYYYYY I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTT

This is adorable. I read it because I thought it would have some very good parts, but then the whole thing turned out great. I will say that your writing itself is a little bit disjointed, especially during the third chapter, and that the sex scenes were a little too squished together.
I would suggest (and I apologize for seeming uncouth) to read some doujinshi online or even watching some porn, because even though they were "lovemaking" it was written so squished together and quick aced it seemed more like a quickie than anything else.
Sorry if my advice is unwanted.
Yours in Fandom,
Lirynn.

Please try to rewrite or update a new chapter of this story and the other story "Pokemon: Ash's Adventure" I seriously love these two stories.

Okay. ) Can not wait to see what you come up with next.