Starting to pick up a bit. When are the wolves going to appear? Hope you update soon!

Good chapter, but too short! When will the wolves come into the story? Please don't take to long to update!

This is getting interesting! Update soon!

Okay this story could be great. It really needs a lot of work as you are telling the story instead of showing it. Your grammar needs a lot of work. I can forgive missing commas and so forth as I suck at them to. But the spelling is terrible and very frustrating. I hope you find a beta maybe ask your readers if someone is able to help you.
Like I said this is going to be a great story but could be fantastic if you got a beta to help.

Plz continue this is really good :)

Your story is original and off to an interesting start. Hope you update soon.

I think this will be a great story! I'm sure you'll have more readers as it progresses on.