Loved it

Fun one shot.

Wow so fcking hot! XD Thank you!

Que buena historia. Felicidades.

Saludos

More.

This story has so much potential to be continued into a multichapter story, hopefully you'll consider that. It'd be interesting if rachel had quinn do a photoshoot for her, with rachel posing nude, the both of them enjoying Broadway's innocent angel letting herself be exposed like that for a camera. But anyway, I loved this oneshot regardless.

This should be a long fic. If love to see him in a relationship in the public eye. Also obviously more sex.

Thanks for sharing. :)

Wow, just wow this was just outstanding cold shower is a must now its sucks its only a one shot but let me just say good job cant wait for more of your fics.

I liked it.

Great little story.

Good

You need to think your stories through a little better. This could have been a steamy story, but your lack of creativity ruined it.

Quinn is a famous photographer who often photographs celebrities. Rachel admires Quinn's work. As a way of repaying Rachel for letting Quinn stay at Rachel's cabin, Quinn could have offered to shoot Rachel for free. Photographing someone can be a very intimate act that would have been a much more believable lead up to sex than Rachel suddenly becoming very aggressive.

I was hoping she wasn't actually on the pill...I would have liked to know why she was.

A sequel would be nice...with relationship and pregnancy.

One issue-The last paragraph has an example of a misplaced clause, and you have several in the fic. The word 'who' should modify a person whom you've just mentioned. You should have broken it into more sentences, like this:

Quinn grinned as she pushed Rachel down on the bed. She squealed in delight as Quinn came face-to-face with the brunette's pussy, soaked with their combined cum.

There are some nitpicky things in that sentence as well (like you can't come face-to-face with something that isn't a face), but that's minor. A little more care, and a little less rushing, would do your writing good.

Ughh your stories are always so hot! Love G!P Quinn