I like this story...it scared the crap out of me in the most entertaining way just like the anime...too bad only one chapter, Yamori/Jason has to be the most twisted and sadistic character in anime but he's still one of my favs (reminds me of Kenpachi from Bleach only 3x as bloodthirsty and far too sadistic)
I might do a story of my own, where Kaneki is free from Jason but loses his chance to kill him, Jason is also unable to track him down for a while, until Hide unsuspectingly crosses his path a bit angry that Kaneki failed to meet him as promised. Seeing his chance, Yamori captures him and challenges a pissed of Kaneki who still hasn't entirely gotten over what he went through by Yamori's torturous hands...Kaneki is to meet with Yamori ALONE or watch Hide go through a far worse torture that may end with Yamori consuming him...this'll be my first Tokyo Ghoul fic, what do ya think?

...uh.../sobs