Good work. Hooray.

Interesting one-shot. Well-written, I can definitely see Post-Rebellion Homura think like this. Hope to see more from you in the future!

Interesting idea that Homura is creating a new repetition of cycles. I'm not sure it's quite accurate as things are clearing deviating and evolving. That's a huge difference from the hell she was locked into wherein nothing she did could alter Madoka's fate.

I see Homura's universe as that of a witches barrier, hers of course. It's a barrier that encompasses the entirety of the universe. And as she is not really a witch, familiars and humanity coexist in an unreal and yet natural way. Her Clara Dolls are fragments of herself. The little torments they cause are a reflection of the guilt and self-loathing she feels.
But that's just my view of things.

I like this, I think it sums up Homuras state of mind perfectly.