Great story! Loving it. Please keep writing!
But if you could would you please stop calling Jo's husband Ramon it makes me cringe... its Sean

Really loved this. I hope you write more! And congrats on the 100 reviews.

I have recently rewatched Forever and thought I'd pass the break time with reading stories... I am so pleased to have found such a wonderfully written story and I wanted to thank you for the enjoyment it has brought me these past few days. It was perfect, you're very talented and as hard it is to get the characters, from the few episodes and the glimpses
we've seen of their personalities, you have done so
perfectly. Thank you for posting and I shall be
looking forward to reading the sequel. Well done.

Re-read this.
"It's been special" wss my favorite line from the whole series! It's so very sad but also so sweet! Heartbreaking, but sweet! The two times it gets said. So pretty... ️️

Very good!

My goodness, she's so deliciously witty!...
Gotta love Jo... I love Jo... *shakes head and smiles*

Another excellent chapter!
Sadly one chapter shorter for me! Oh the bittersweetness...!

Holy shit, man, that was so beautiful;-;
I know I sounded like a dude going emotional, but srsly, that was awesome!

I'm going to be very very honest, and forgive me if I'm too straight-forward ;) but I read almost every single Forever fic out there, and skipped this series because it didn't seem interesting or hadn't interested me until I ran out of fics to read(and because I read the sequel, loved it, and thought I'd give this a try. Not that there's anything wrong with the synopsis or anything like that that would make it unattractive, but just gave me the feeling it would be too work-related stuff that I generally find boring, but it wasn't. Just thought I'd clear that out :))
That was the 1st reaction.

The second was to see there were 33 chapters! I has honestly dumbfounded - I have written series before and could not fathom writing more than, say, six or seven chapters, and 33? For real?
But THEN, I got this far and I am THRILLED there are so many chapters still to go! Woohoo! And I'm not sorry I didn't read it before because, well, now, it's being special. Lol BY THE WAY - "it's been special". That's like the sweetest most special and amazingly sweet. Thing. Ever. What!
Tsk, you're truly awesome. This story is a real gem. I love it. This chapter specifically was really really nice.

Bottom line is, you rock.

Um. In this chapter, 20, Henry says he is a neophyte. That's someone who is new to a subject or religion. I think you mean necrophile.
Loving this so far, will no doubt finish it in twenty minutes, just wanted to say before I forgot.
Thank you for writing this, and confirming that I'm not the only one who thinks a blood transfusion would pass on the immortality. Just, my view is, what about Abe? Poor Henry, going to have to watch his son die...

Great story! I enjoyed it!

Nice story. I really like the idea of Jo becoming immortal. I think Henry really needs someone in his life that he can count on to always be there with him other than Adam.

Omg , when Adam said that nobody touches Henry but him, he sounded so much like a jealous lover.

A relaxing time in the park. Very nice. (I'm using some limited time on my family's desktop computer right now to write a review. My laptop is having some 'adapter' problems with the internet and such. So hopefully that'll be resolved soon. Right now I'm limited in my reviews and computer time).

I love the line you have there, 'And so the road began for them... a road we shall follow them down together.' Very sweet. I'll try and keep my eyes peeled for your sequel/future installments. Hopefully on my own laptop down the line. Hopefully everything on my laptop and such will be fixed and I can read and take my time on there for your future stories. So if I'm a little MIA, that's why. ;) :) Great job! Keep up the good work. :D

oh that is super good! can't wait for more! )

Not often the FBI gives plaques like that. They really should be honored. :) Lucas is so cute. I love the little bromance that he has with Henry. He really idolizes the man. You can tell that Reece thinks Henry and Jo are a good team too, even as more than partners. It won't affect their work obviously. She already knows about the immortality. ;)

Once again Henry's "Sherlock-like" eye for detail helped solve a case. Hanson likes Henry in his own way, I think... or rather, he tolerates him for being too good at his job. Nice double-update! Congrats on this story being the most read in the fandom. Job well done. Of course take your time on your update. :)

That's exactly how I picture Reece reacting to things. Again we're left at the end of the chapter with several strands of "this could be trouble." great stuff!