Amazing story, please update soon.

yes, it seems a bit odd that she just gets in the car without evening questioning who they really are and where they are going. maybe she's got a hidden agenda too?

okay, so yellow eyes stabbed her, then healed her and then erased her memory and dumbed her at the club?

oh gosh, what a heart gripping story - so much can be said and yet i feel at a total loss for words. you sure know how to paint a picture and then just rip it to shreds, you know. i cannot begin to feel or understand what dean must be going through right now. the gripping fear, the total loss of control. the big failure - failed to keep his promise, failed to protect, failed to save. my heart aches for him right now.

So I've been binging the hell out of this, and it's really good. And I can't wait for more. I'm so ashamed in myself in the fact that I caught up so fast

Glad to hear from you again :) Thanks for the chapter. Nice read, hope to see more from you soon.

So glad you’re back! Still loving this story! Can’t wait to see more

Holy shit. This first chapter.

Any update soon?

Awesome story!

WHER NEED MORE DONT LEAVE US HANGING

bABY COME BACK

Was a little weary at first about Crowley being in the cage since he isn't that powerful but great job saving yourself when you said "son of a witch" makes it more believable. Also, very in character for Cas to do what he thinks is right to help someone he cares about! Cant wait for more and it was nice to see Haley again :)

"I think often we don't realize how much of an impact a person has on our lives until they're not there anymore." Brilliant and so heart stakingly true. Dean feels guilty and loss and he should but when he got back to the motel it was right back into that big brother facade for Sam and that was perfect. I love that Sam looked her up online, very in character for him. And kind of wondering how the whole baby story line will play out once they are reunited, if it is something they will ask her and if she is coming back as soulless then that might be a good twist to put in there. Have them ask her about it when she doesn't have a soul... might lead to some interesting Winchester moments!

I don't know if I've mentioned this before or not but I usually take notes when I read, quotes that stuck out or even plot twists but I couldn't tear my eyes away long enough to jot a single word down. I loved getting to know more about Roxy and I'm curious what Crowley is up to. I too ship Rachel and Sam an am a little sad her character is done :( Maybe a one shot with Sam and Rachel in the future ;) I also like how you are describing their pain but it doesn't feel repetitive or drawn out. Kudos my friend :)

The beginning of this chapter I thought Rachel had like kidnapped Dean or something lol but glad you showed us what he is dreaming instead of just describing it. Cant wait to see what's going on in Wisconsin and what emotions that may stir up for the brothers.