Great start. Please keep updates coming!

I think the premise and start of the story are interesting. So I will keep my eye on this to see where this is going. Thank you for sharing your story.

I was sooo excited when i saw this story hadn't been abandoned, please update again i really enjoyed this latest chapter. :D

I know it's been a while but I hope you update .

Hope you update soon

Sugh a good start please update soon

You going to continue this story? I think its got great potential. I like the slight divergance from the cannon. I think the Eion character could present an interesting story.
Wren's story is similar to Charlotte and Clarke's right? Making a fuss after parent gets floated? Makes you wonder how many got arrested for that.
Mildly curious about the one child pollicy on the ark, they wanted a decreasing population?
Sorry rambling now.
I like stories with Grounders in them. They are less likely to directly follow the show, which can get boring and predictable.
Will this story hold more insight into the Grounder way of life?
- a Scottish reader

Good story so far

hi i really enjoyed the beginning of this story and it had me hooked. Could you please continue it as it would be interesting to find out what could happen

Omg please update soon you haven't for so long! I can't wait until they finally meet :)

Bwah! I love this story already and I'm only on the first chapter. Grounders always need some loving! And Lincoln, goodness, was he a sexy beast! XD So I'm assuming Eion is hot as hell too!

Woo! Lovely!

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Please update, I really enjoyed reading it this far :)

I love this story so far it's really good and I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope that Wren meets Eion again next chapter! :D

The only thing I would complain about is that you're trying to make Wren Clarke. I think some of the parts you are giving to Wren are parts that are important to Clarke's character.
I know that Wrens the main character but it would be cool to see you venture from the way the show goes.
But i do like where this is going and I look forward to the next update :)

This is great ! I love it and I hope you'll be continuing this ! It will be soooo great to see the evolution of their relationship ! Can't wait to see what you'll do in the next chapter :) !