Wow..I just found this..this is getting good...I do hope if u do a pairing it will be Harry/Daphne..i do like that pairing...now, is Harry mad at Sirius to like he is with Ron and Hermoine...I do hope tbat harry doesnt get with Ginny I like Daphne, Luna or Susan...will Harry start being friends with Neville he needs more friends...will he be Lord to more than Potter..will he have anymore..and if he does will he need more than 1 wife...Please update..I would like to read more.

this is great

I've definitely enjoyed this 5-chapter story snippet, and wish you'd continued it.

AWESOME STORY

Like this a lot

this is a good story so far, i'm glad I found it and hope to read more soon

Love the story please update soon.

Love this story please Up date soon!

If Harry is so angry with hermione and ron why did he leave them gifts? That's a bit confusing but other than that this was really good!

very enjoyable

Awesome chapter.

It's somewhat slow going, isn't it? There are plenty of things that happened, but you aren't exactly showing any changes in your main character yet. Apart from initial AU, Harry is still reactive, asexual, a little dim and quite pathetic in general. He supposedly quit following Dumbles, but is perfectly fine with Headmaster defending him at the hearing (while having no clue whatsoever what Dumbledore is going to say), he is supposedly angry at R&Hr, but he gifts them with precious family items from his own vault.

Sirius is absent altogether apart from the hearing scene, and there is absolutely no reaction to his emergence as an innocent man and Lord Black.

Goblins are so completely out of character it isn't even funny. Cart-driver dispersing soul-searching advice to a distraught teenager? And how exactly goblins are keeping up with muggles to the point of expressing experience and familiarity with technical advancements? Why the hell they themselves still use ledgers and carts and torches instead of electricity and computers?

All in all, I'm conflicted. On one hand, you have a writing style I like to see in fanfiction - easy and smooth, apart from excessive pathos in some of your dialogues. On the other hand, I didn't yet saw anything I particularly liked. To follow or not to follow is the question.

I really am enjoying this story, please update soon

I like how your story starts
But l only read Harry and Hermione pairings
So until next time
Gloria

Good chapter, bye