I feel for Molly's flat haha. Loved it :)

Thank you for sharing!

Loved this story, great job!

Love the dream about Alan Rickman..he does have a nice voice. :-)

I've been making my way through your stories today and I have to say that I usually enjoy the idea you have, but your spelling is making me want to cry.

That little flag on your profile page says you're American so English is most likely your mother tongue.

Please have a look at that, it would make reading so much easier and a lot more enjoyable.
Especially homophones seem to cause you problems.
From this chapter:
Carrot? Guess you mean carat.
Suffices and surfaces doesn't even sound the same.

Others I remember
Sherlock has a distinctive gait, not gate

Laying and lying. Someone is lying down. Or someone is lying. Or someone is laying down something. Now if Sherlock were to pick up Molly he could lay her down on the bed. Or he might want to lay his hands on her.

Also your/you're. That one is so easy, just try if you can use you are and its you're, but if it could also be 'my' it is your. (Like put your arms around me, could be (different meaning of course) put my arms around me/you, but never put you are arms around me. That just does not make any sense, does it?)

I absolutely agree they belong together. Brilliant story. Thank you.

Hahahaha! OMG! That was HOT! Just ... Hnnghhhh! And hilarious as well! :D

Just one teeny tiny thing, you wrote organism instead of orgasm! Oopsie!

Loved this story!

Fantastic! Please, please post the next chapter soon.

Oh gosh, what a great story! So funny and cute! Great!

lol...awesome chapter Thanks for the update!

Destroying?! As in having sex in it on every possible flat piece of furniture?

It went from hot,hotter,HOTTEST,hilarious and finally CUTEST! :D
Amazing!

Hot ang funny I am so sad to see this end, it was great fun reading it

Tease! I love this story, keep up the fantastic writing

Oh my god! Oh dear, that was good! How Sherlock handled it!
You have to update soon!