Reviews for Ashes from the Flames |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Love the description and details |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeekk lovely story, need more stories like this! Please keep writing books such as this oh merciful author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A silmaril? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story you have here and very original! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy the story very very much and probably the reason why you aren't getting much feedback is because people are trying to read it as match as that can become it's a really good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This absolutely brilliant,fantastic even ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, to wrap it all up, I liked it, but your writing has improved /so/ much since 2014. I hope it doesn't offend you if I skip the sequel. Off to read Silent Flower of Song! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snickers* Nice. You know, after being immersed in Fiondil for so long, it's weird to see a different system of elf-aging. Especially from you. ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank GOODNESS. *glares* I can't believe I forgot she was a Phoenix... ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait what? You're not allowed to do that. Nu-uh. Nope. No way. You can't kill her! ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() *blinks* She does seem to acquire fathers pretty quickly. ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() 900 years of time and space and I've never met anyone who wasn't important. Hey, it's a sentence. Anyway, on the topic of the story - I like that Bard came to help. Also, the small alterations from the plot that come with Naryliel being involved are really fun to read. ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'm your new undercover agent on loan from Scotland Yard. Code name: The Doctor. These are my top operatives: the Legs, the Nose, and Mrs. Robinson." "I hate you" "No you don't" You said to write /something/ in the little box. You didn't specify whether it had to be relevant to the story or not. :P ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked your run through of the dwarves. It actually reminds me in a weird way of OYAN families. ~Nimrodel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see how you really couldn't have done anything else, but Thorin did seem to make the decision a little bit more quickly than would be in character for him. Despite the fact that he now has a daughter, Smaug slaughtered pretty much all the dwarves of Erebor. Also - I liked the dwarf tumbling routine. :) ~Nimrodel |