Reviews for Ashes from the Flames |
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Hold My Beer 1303 chapter 8 . 3/8 Great story! Love the description and details |
Hold My Beer 1303 chapter 2 . 3/8 Eeeekk lovely story, need more stories like this! Please keep writing books such as this oh merciful author! |
Child of Dreams chapter 7 . 12/13/2018 A silmaril? |
PhantomGoat13 chapter 25 . 9/13/2018 Awesome story you have here and very original! |
Hells book 666 chapter 6 . 9/24/2017 I enjoy the story very very much and probably the reason why you aren't getting much feedback is because people are trying to read it as match as that can become it's a really good story |
Festus3.5 chapter 23 . 9/29/2016 This absolutely brilliant,fantastic even ! |
Nimrodel626 chapter 24 . 9/1/2016 Well, to wrap it all up, I liked it, but your writing has improved /so/ much since 2014. I hope it doesn't offend you if I skip the sequel. Off to read Silent Flower of Song! |
Nimrodel626 chapter 23 . 9/1/2016 *snickers* Nice. You know, after being immersed in Fiondil for so long, it's weird to see a different system of elf-aging. Especially from you. ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 22 . 9/1/2016 Thank GOODNESS. *glares* I can't believe I forgot she was a Phoenix... ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 21 . 9/1/2016 Wait what? You're not allowed to do that. Nu-uh. Nope. No way. You can't kill her! ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 20 . 9/1/2016 *blinks* She does seem to acquire fathers pretty quickly. ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 19 . 9/1/2016 900 years of time and space and I've never met anyone who wasn't important. Hey, it's a sentence. Anyway, on the topic of the story - I like that Bard came to help. Also, the small alterations from the plot that come with Naryliel being involved are really fun to read. ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 18 . 9/1/2016 "I'm your new undercover agent on loan from Scotland Yard. Code name: The Doctor. These are my top operatives: the Legs, the Nose, and Mrs. Robinson." "I hate you" "No you don't" You said to write /something/ in the little box. You didn't specify whether it had to be relevant to the story or not. :P ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 17 . 9/1/2016 I liked your run through of the dwarves. It actually reminds me in a weird way of OYAN families. ~Nimrodel |
Nimrodel626 chapter 16 . 9/1/2016 I see how you really couldn't have done anything else, but Thorin did seem to make the decision a little bit more quickly than would be in character for him. Despite the fact that he now has a daughter, Smaug slaughtered pretty much all the dwarves of Erebor. Also - I liked the dwarf tumbling routine. :) ~Nimrodel |