the hell does a Spartan keep up with a Shinobi of Post 4th war Sasuke and even Sakura to an extent.
Just because you have chakra does not mean you simply become all civilians in the Naruto world have chakra in them.
Despite being impressive,the Sparyans won't be a match for someone of Kage level.

YEAH ME GUSTO MUCHO HAPPY ESTOY FELIZ POR ESTO

Spartan’s never give out their name to strangers, ever.

Could no longer bare to read this... Too many inconsistencies to make it worth it.
SPARTANs won't just give out their names especially SPARTAN 2s .
No one even Questioned what the hell an AI was
Then they just place him into the mission roster?
All that put together with how civilian the Master Chief was it just got to me... So I'm done

Actually a little mad now. Only SPARTANs and Halsey and Mendez can call John , John. And cortana certainly wouldn't have said his name to others

A SPARTAN would never give their name so casually

just continue

Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well! I gotta say, I like the plot, the premise and the story line for this fic! I am glad I took the time to read it! Only real problem I have with it though, is the fact that Six is supposed to be a Spartan II, not a III, as far as I know. I am not dinging you though, cause it's your story and you can make the changes you want, and I also don't remember Six being a Lt., but hey, been a while since I played the game, you know? Just hoping that your muse will be releasing more chapters for this story into your hands from her's, soon, but if not, I will wait patiently for the story to continue! And also, are there going to be any pairings for John, or Six? and is this gonna be a Naru/Hina pairing like your hinting at? Anyways, again, here's hoping your muse releases the next chapters for this story soon!

Another thing, hes not just moving faster than the eue can keep up with, on several occasions lee HAS created sonic booms,

Major error on the sharingan. That thing, fully developed, could track a bullet, as long as its within his field of range and he had the chakra he could, can, and has repeatedly surpassed any and all forms of human reaction time.
Kakashi once used it to predict a lightning bolts trajectory and hit it with his chidori.
It may as well slow time down altogether for the user.

France85, you are such an idiot. A ninja in naruto would get ripped in half by a spartan, shot in the face, and anyone can kill sasuke and naruto and other characters and it is to the point where a piece of poop would kill naruto.

Love it! Keep it coming! I'll be disappointed if you end this too soon.

Can't wait to read more!

are you writng ive been waiting for a year

Its an awesome story, even though I feel Master Cheif is a bit too warm. The plotdevelopment is execellent. PLs kepp writing this story