Oh good she's finally dead

Well...You completely screwed newt over in this story so...that's something. Have no clue how anyone could want such a selfish piece of shit like andy, but then again you made minho a asshole so I guess they deserved each other. All the years he spent with newt in the glade suddenly become less than nothing once andrea came around. Suddenly andrea was his "best friend" despite being a bitch. The only silver lining was that she knew she was a selfish hypocritical bitch, though for some reason she didn't try to be better...hmmmm. Liked the part where Brenda called her out though, but I'm gonna pretend that this chapter is the ending. I know there is still a chapter left but I honestly can't stomach any more. This story could've been so much better if newt had lived and Andy stayed dead.

Lol she is funny. Acting so shocked when this was exactly what she has been leading up to this whole time. I'm surprised she didn't just laugh the kiss off like she does minhos 'jokes' about stealing her from newt Cheating bitch, gally was right about her. Anyway I'm interested in seeing how the story goes other than andrea fucking up her relationship. Newt honestly deserves better at this point.

I love this story, but Andrea is kinda selfish though, she doesn't have a very loyal personality. And she is always making questionable decisions. Between being blatantly flirty with minho despite already having a boyfriend and lying to newt but somehow turning the argument around so she can have a reason to be mad a HIM, I'm not really liking her lately. And then making the dumb decision to leave safety when it was already night and the greivers were comming? Ugh. She would have had time to get her stuff sooner had she not been flirting with minho. She has no shame, no real thought or loyalty to newt. Which is funny when she herself was insecure about another girl...hypocrite. At this point I'm reading to see how this ends and because I love both newt and minho, not because I care about whatever happens to andrea. I wanted to read a poly story, just didn't expect the girl to be so dumb, two faced and a cheater. I thought things would be more balanced/honest and have less lying/selfishness/sneaking around. Well, on to the next chapters

It's been a long time since I read this piece of crap, but unfortunately I remember clearly how horrible I thought it was.

Here's why:

- Andrea can't take criticism. I mean if she can't do something then she can't, but not accepting people telling her that is childish and stupid.

- She knew things she couldn't have known like what a geisha is (strangely enough Newt did too) or what periods are or what an amusement park is and what you can do there. That's unrealistic as hell and defies the logic of the movies/books who clearly state that the Gladers lose ALL of their memories when they enter the Glade. I mean, seriously if you want to write a fanfiction about a book series then actually READ them and stick to their content.

- Her relationship with Newt was pictured as "sunshine and rainbows" all in all very sweet, but if Andrea loved him so much as she said, why didn't she give a damn when he died? Where lies their "great love" you talked about? This only tells me that she DIDN'T love him if she was able to forget him so quickly. And do you know what else it tells me? Oh, yes. That's stupid shit and so is your whole story and OC!

- The only thing that made reading this a bit less agonizing was Gally insulting that bitch and putting her in her place at the gathering.

I'm not even sorry, I'm insulting you and your story that much, because there just isn't anything positive to say about this piece of junk and your equally shitty writing. I mean it was so horrible that I wouldn't let my worst enemy read this and that's saying something.

That girl in the picture looks like a cross between Darci Lynn and the girl that plays sleeping beauty in the live action movie.

In group B they probably do have girl necessities because it wouldn't be akward for each other but this group? I don't know hope not

This is really good! Your writing is very captivating, i couldn't put my phone down! Love your characters and the character development throughout the story. I was craving some more Maze Runner, and some romance! Keep on writing!

You should definetley vote for newt

Newt

This is great! LOVE her attitude!

UH, no
i usually love Andy but right ow? Badmouthing Thomas? I MEAN. They are upset about THE OTHERS dying, and yet, they think its perfectly fine to blame and hate a boy that they think is probably dead! Whatever happened to respecting someone's MEMORY Andy? HUH?!

This is effortlessly my favourite story ever. I just kept coming back for it. I've reread it a few times already because I just love it so much. It's so well-written, and the story satisfy you in a way (man I don't even know anymore). And the fact that you wrote two different endings for the readers, I respect that. All the conflicts, all those feels, man! I just want you to keep writing this series like maybe a short fanfiction on Andy and Newt's life in the afterglade (lmao is that right?) or maybe Andy and Minho's life together, building a family and stuff with their perfect brown haired kids running around (GAHHH sorry I can't, I just love to think what comes next and what next and what next). ANYWAYS, I just wanna applaud you for writing this story. You don't have any idea how much I love this story and how much I love you for writing it. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SATISFYING MY FANGIRL HEART! I LOVE YOU AUTHOR-NIM KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

Man. I came for Newt/OC and I'm really gunning him over Minho, as much as I like him lol. Love the writing and I love the length of the chapters.

omg ik i was annoyed and I LOVE u fanfiction and the maze runner series in general but known of my friends are into :(