Awwww!

All these feels are gonna kill me... TTATT

That was sweet! I'm really hoping Oda-sensei will explain the reasons why Sabo wasn't there. I mean Luffy went to hell and back for Ace right after being separated from his crew. So I'm kinda hoping for a good reason. Though I still love Sabo and am really happy he's alive and I know Luffy will forgive him for anything still, I liked your story :) Good job here! DR

Cool I loved
It

... I needed this so badly. Your OP bonding fics are just so(sorrowfully, painfully) beautiful. And I'm glad to see so many brackets, they can add such a depth to your sentences. I'm weird, I know, but I like double-meanings. And I'm sorry that you're stuck with a hopeless sadist for a fan, but that doesn't make you a sadist. That just now was nonsense, but I hope you understood what I meant.

It was so moving :'3
I really loved it!

:) Sabosan

Interesting story. I wonder if Canon Luffy knows that his brother was buried by Shanks and the Whitebeard pirates. I guess we will find out as we get further into the new world. This story needs a sequel where Luffy goes to the island where Ace and Whitebeard are buried. It would make for an interesting story.

IT WAS SOOO SWEEEEETT! XDD
MAI KOKORO! HNNGG!
IT'S TOO SWEET FOR MY HEART!
THAT LAST CONVERSATION! IT'S TOO MUCH FOR MY HEART!
ASDFGH! THE FEELS!
GREAT STORY BY THE WAY!

this story is cool. you should write a sequel where Luffy comes to the island to see his brothers grave and meets up with the whitebeard pirate remnants and maybe shanks to.

Thank you so much for this beautiful story! Wish there would be a scence in the canon similar to this story:))

Awww, so emotional and cute story, I love Luffy and Sabo! 3 I want to read about Luffy with Ace's grave.