I remember thos scene, from the show. I remember feeling so strongly for how lost Clara felt... I'm looking forward to the next chapter, how you create the rest of this story from this scene.

Amazing but I would like to read a part 2

Do you plan to continue this? I sure hope so because I'd really love to find out what happens next. This is a really interesting idea. :)

I really like what your style of writing, especially for your first Doctor Who story! I loved that episode and I feel like the show could have gone in a direction similar to this. It is a very solid idea for a plot and the actual dialogue from the show makes it seem believable. Keep up the good work! :)

looking forward to your next update this is a really good start.

Muy bueno.

The poor thing, beautiful connection.

Can't wait for more! I really like it