Reviews for Defenseless Chapter 7 (Finale) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, what a sad ending indeed. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSHHHHH YOU POSTED IT YOU ACTUALLY DID YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY I AM SO PROUD OF YOU THIS IS AMAZING AND I REALLY LOVE IT This was my first attempt at a chaptered fic and it brings back crazy memories to get back into the story line and the mood and everything and you just continued it so well! You kept the tone and the plot and it makes sense and it adds on a final ending and ahhhh yayyyyyy. My goodness this is fabulous. (also you don't need to apologize in your description. learn how to get better about tense switches but you don't need to advertise weak spots in the summary. that's when people are deciding whether to click your fic or not! This is awesome so let them know that!) sapphireswimming |