Reviews for Black |
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![]() ![]() ![]() my god, this is incredible! I'm so sad, but oddly satisfied at how perfect this is? god damn. just fuck me up. I'm good. I'm fine. I'm not crying. you're crying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was written well but it makes me sad. Robin misses Regina. He needs her. I say leave Marian and go back to the woman you love Robin! It's the right thing to do every time the thought crosses your mind! GO BACK TO HER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well no need to make me sad gosh man what did I do I'm just sitting here wanting to read some fluffy fanfic then I find this piece of angst and I'm like why not so I read it and now I'm sad but its okay because they're together again but Idk I'm rambling now |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so painful and beautiful at the same time. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How can something short break my heart into pieces? Amazing writing as always :') |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. I really, really do. Love getting to see Robin's side of this whole shitstorm. Him wanting Regina from afar, how he grapples with the terrible decision he's been forced to make. As always, you ground it in details that make it feel real, and ring so true to the characters that it's hard to separate canon from your embellishments. Their coffee preferences seem to fit them so well, and I love the thought of Robin playfully teasing her for her 'high born' way of taking hers. Of course he finds himself missing her! Of COURSE! Love that he dreams of her, can't detach his soul from hers no matter how he tries. "choking on regret" - perfectly painful line. Love the way he seems to cave in under the weight of his longing for her. Shame, not just for being unable to get her, the technical 'other woman' out of his head, but for being unable to choose her when he KNOWS - he cannot love Marian, long for Marian the way he does Regina. Cannot stop himself from wanting to remember how she tastes. The end comparison of Regina to warmth was heart-rendingly beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Wow. This is heartbreaking. The devastation, the longing. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() Update soon please ! |
![]() ![]() As usual...perfection. :) How you turn simple coffee, black or with sugar and cream, into this is a marvel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! Absolutely beautiful :) Love your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was simple, beautiful and heartbreaking - I now feel like I need to bury my heart in the woods. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For something so simple and brief, it packs a punch and captures several aspects of their relationship and respective personalities beautifully. "No. No, make it like hers" is a wonderfully effective line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, so emotional and heart breaking and so well done. Beautifully written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that is a beautiful story! I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is bitter & sweet- just like the coffee. Perfect & beautiful! |