Like the story so far, but I am really struggling with the typos and incorrect word usage. For instance, it should be, "cat analogy." Not " cat eulogy." Very, VERY different meanings. It's also hard to decipher some sentences due to words missing all together.

This was amazing! Love how George took Draco in, and everything! Loved this

OMG I loved this! Usually I read stories much mlre explicit but I dont know, something about this just had me continually reading and smiling. The build up was realistic and fun! always ready to read more!

I liked the story, I just have one question. What is the point of silencing with a silk if it was possible to do some silencing spell? Silencio, for example, as the muffilato was invented by Snape and not many new of it.

Love this story . And the development between Harry and Draco.

I really enjoyed this story! I liked the friendship between Draco and George and how George was willing to give him another chance even after what happened with Fred. Ron was more mature about the situation than I would expect and I liked how he got on with him OK and how Draco was invited to the Burrow. Snape was an entertaining addition to the story, I always wondered whether he'd have a portrait considering the circumstances.

It was very sad to see that the Slytherins had such a hard time after the war, but I giess that's realistic unfortunately. I'm glad Draco wasn't hurt in the end but I imagine that would take a lot of time to get over what happened. I'm glad Badrick got his comeuppance. I hope Pansy managed to get herself out of there too.

Overall I enjoyed the plot and characterisation in this story. I noticed a couple of typos and a couple of out of places ideas, for example in the UK we don't really have summer camp. But this was easily overlooked because your style of writing is good and the plot was so interesting. I can see you have a few other Harry/Draco stories so I will be checking those out too!

Yeah, Daddy Malfoy taking care of bidness!

Very much enjoyed your story...very cute! A lot of typos and misuse of words though...usually I stop reading when there are so many, but somehow you managed to keep me interested. I'll have to go see what else you've written. Thank you for posting this entertaining read!

Yes, I wouldn't want to be yanked around either because someone else could make up their minds.

Calling them Love Potions is a misnomer. They don't resemble love in any way. They are more accurately closer to drugs that make people suggestible, which is raping the mind, or a date rape drug. They always seemed to be taken too lightly in the books. There would be no Voldemort without one. His mother certainly raped his Muggle father in that scenario. If someone tried anything similar to a girl they'd be in prison or on the sex offenders list. I know you covered it as a bad thing, but too many people take the subject like it's fine and nothing to be bothered about.

Seems like he might have been biding his time for Draco to be vulnerable enough to attack.

I'm not surprised he freaked out. I feel like he should have had some clue before now since everyone else did.

I was wondering where the weird kiss and the threat on Draco came in.

And what did he say exactly?

Hahaha I suppose that all would be a surprise to Snape.

Hmm... I wonder if that's like gelatin made from animal fat.