Truly enjoyed the story. Very well written. I was riveted from page 1.

I’m leaving another review because it was just so freaking good! I love the detail in which you described their relationships with their colleagues and SEAL teammatesit really adds another dimension to their past! I love love loved it!

I absolutely loved this story! You’re a great writer!

I left the H50 world when Catherine left and recently returned upon seeing they got a happy ending. So I went in search for fics that would help stave my craving and this fic is everything. It had drama, it had romance, it had some light-hearted moments. I love how it’s also a bit of a JAG crossover too. Protective!Catherine is a fave! I would love to see a one-shot follow-up of McRoll recovering and dealing with the fall out to tie it all up. Then talking about their feelings, Vatherine telling him about her new station, and hen just being them and celebrating the win. It’s those soft moments that make us melt for them.

You write these two superbly. Thanks for sharing!

jesus, i want to punch this guy in the face! fucking asshole!

Excellent

That was wonderful. I'm sad to see it and, but I live how you wrapped it up. And I agree that Steve (and Catherine) would have conflicted feelings about the navy after that experience. Well done!

One of the most surprising things for me while reading this chapter is that I like this Danny. He's soooooo nice. But of course I love Steve's SEAL team much better.
I love your writing style very much. Very detailed and emotional (when it needs to be emotional). My heart clenches at the very small detail (Steve called Danny AND Danny apologized for making Cath cry. Love this). So glad that the charge has been dropped and now, Cath and Steve can live together in Hawaii.

Looking forward to your upcoming fictions. Hopefully with Michelle being back as Catherine, you will be inspired to continue writing xoxo

Thanks for a great story, I'm sorry it's come to an end.

I love it so much thanks

Wonderful ending to a fantastic story. Just sorry to see it end. I always look forward to everything that you have written with Steve and Catherine as the main characters! Thank you for all your hard work and will look forward to more stories in the future!

You're absolutely right and you wrote it beautifully! I think you ended on just the right note and made a good decision with Steve's feelings of betrayal - how could he not feel that way? A wonderful story - one of new favorites!

Loved this story! Your next project could be a sequel. Steve and Cath have to find a new normal after this and heal from this ordeal. Just a suggestion. :-)

{{hugs}}

Mac

P.S. Great Job!

Absolutely loved it!

I just found this story and I love what you have so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! And I agree with you that a decent man can deal with a woman's menstruation cycle. My husband has no problem at all dealing with mine and even picks up supplies for me when I need him to. He's not squeamish about it at all. It's a part of life. Nothing to be ashamed about.

{{hugs}}

Mac