This. Was. AMAZING! Wow. So satisfying...

An excellent story. Glad I read it. I absolutely loved the creativity with the characters and personas you used.

I like the double meaning in the chapter title

"you have a girlfriend?"
"Selphie"
"my condolences"

XD

I don't understand the appeal with Sora and Yuffie, then again I'm not one to talk

Hayner seems like an outstanding person

Is it bad that I lol'd when Namine said she was a caged bird

Donald: I'm a duck!
...sigh...
XD

So this kidnapping of Namine, I'm interested to see where it goes!

Namine you crack whore
just jelly of her looks

jk jk

SO! Wow, I'm incredibly behind
Yuffie is kinda all over the place, anime-ish and tunnel visioned. Nice distinction from the others there

Also, I was a bit confused when Roxas got arrested - that was random! Good thing it was all a misunderstanding, I guess

So, I guess Yuffie got her persona now? That damn heartless version of her... still made me laugh, though.

Next chap!

And so. It ends.

Heh. I saw the email of the update while almost asleep, then i suddenly woke up. I must read the finale of this brilliant and awesome tale!

This chapter was, in one word, perfect. I'm not exaggerating. The party, the "paradoxes", Sora's bonds with his other friends and family helping him, he facing his own self, Ansem's final confrontation, Izanagi using the X-Blade(

Heeey sorry i didn't review chapter 23 . It was incredible when they found out about Terra and him using Magatsu Izanagi!Awesome!(also the part where he said Eraqus was the one throwing people in, and then Xion be like "Gotcha")

Ohhh boy. When Terra almost shot Sora i could feel my heart stop!

And thus, after many hardships and struggles, the heroes triumphed over the darkness and claimed the truth.

Next chapter's the end? Well...been a wild ride. I'm feeling quite guilty in not reviewing the last chapter. Such a great tale like yours deserves much more attention and love!

I wonder if you'll make Sora fight against...her, you know? If you are i don't wanna spoil the surprise.

I thank you for this, The Adventure of Stinky-Breath Sora xD(No, really, thanks a lot for this

Also congrats on completing FE Fates! Maybe we could battle when Pokémon Sun and Moon comes out xD)

Looking forward for the end of this marvelous story.

Geez, why doesn't this story have more reviews? I'd imagine that people would like this kind of story more.

Anyway, I'd never usually think of Persona and Kingdom Hearts together, but you managed to pull it off! I'm enjoying reading this story, so please update soon! I can't wait for Sora to fight the culprit!

Well i've been reading this masterpiece for a while. Last time i stopped and forgot to review was...chapter 20.

Dude...i am SO GLAD USAGI IS ALIVE!My heart sunk badly at chapter 21, and now...she's okay! Ohh THANK YOU!

*huff, puff* Sorry.

So, first up, thank you for joining two tales that i love, KH and P4, your writing style and characterization for everyone are perfect!

My favorite parts are...

"On second thought, jump. Soar like a fucking eagle!"

I died laughing when Sora said this to Selphie, also with the Jaws theme song, nice touch!

And the part where Sora was beating up Eraqus, when he saw his bloodied hand along with him, the same.

I loved the comparison, seriously. And Sora's eyes turned...yellow? Is his Heartless still there? I'm sorry i didn't beat P4 yet, my file stopped at Yukiko's castle, gotta get back to playing it.

Oh and i also loved the part Sora and Zack like, talked. While Sora was on the roof. And Zack told him he was happy Sora came live with them, at least Usagi has company xD.

Looking forward for the next!

And so, the duck was revealed to be Donald. XD

YAY! Roxas got his "Persona!" I think? Still not sure what that means. Battle gear? I haven't played that game.

Roxas liked Larxene. Ugh. I love how everyone calls her out on that antenna hair

So, anyone that appears in the mirror dies, huh? Interesting!

Sorry for being so late in reading this! I have a bunch to catch up on! :P

First impressions! (Writing this as I go along)
I'm not going to comment much on grammar and whatnot, because you said your writing has improved since you started this, and after reading that oneshot you put out, I think that's true.

The whole thing with the magic cards:
I feel like Sora should have reacted more to it; like "uh, wtf?" The scene after where he woke up on the train again was fine, but I think while all that was happening, he would have at least thought it was a dream of some sort. Like, dude, I must be trippin! :p
I like how you named the "Long nosed man" lol

I lol'd when Sora was like, "nah, I don't want bird shit in my hair."

Nice Sailor Moon touch. Usagi? Serena. Uh huh. :P

Lol, well dang, Sora is already offered a job? Who cares about qualifications? Looks and who you know is all that matters! Actually, that's probably partly true... most of my jobs were gotten because I knew someone... um. Yeah.

So, hold up. Zack just leaves Usagi chan at home all by herself all the time? I'm surprised she's not the next Matilda. At least he's nice. Maybe that's why. Hehe. Also, wouldn't Sora know what his uncle does? I figured he'd at least ask? Idk.

I noticed you forgot some periods at the ends of sentences. Also, ofc there's a school there, Zack. Lol. smh
Hmm, wondering why his former teacher had to announce his business to the class. Little weird.

"OH, this dude is riding his skateboard. Wait! He fell over? I should walk away and not check on him at all." Sorry, but I lol'd at this

Vexen is quite the nutcase, but makes it entertaining :P

Okay, if there was a 'dreadful' incident near the school, I think the school would go on lockdown lol

"Yuffie had a girl with light blonde hair."
Just add "next to her" and I think it'll be fine. I'm a little surprised to know that Painted beta'd this, because I feel like she wouldn't let that stuff slide? Idk. Haha.
Also, Sora mentioning "she must be the quiet type" was a little strange placement. Hmm.

Btw, none of this is a jab at you. I'm just giving my impressions!

LOL damn! "Should we really just leave Roxas there?"
Namine: Oh, he'll be fine
XD
Poor Roxas

When Sora was talking about how he got to know Yuffie and Namine's personalities, it was like reiterating everything you already previously showed, other than Yuffie knowing martial arts.

So, Sora and Roxas are finally formally introduced! Whoopie! Lol, Sora's a lifesaver for pulling him out of the trash can. Smh.

Little weird of Larxene to thank Sora for being Roxas' friend. Hmm.

Well, that's a little weird with the mirror thing. Lol.

I think having namine in that next scene was a little pointless - about her saying she works at the Inn.

When Sora was sticking his hand through the mirror, how and why did Roxas and Yuffie fall on him? Lol. And a TV? I thought it was a mirror?

Okay, so I haven't played Persona 4, so I'm not really sure where this fic is going. A huge duck? Lol.

I feel bad for Roxy. Sounds like he's gonna be the one that's picked on the most. Overall, this was a pretty decent chapter. I'm gonna see where it goes. It may take me a while to read this, but I promise I'll review every chapter when I do! Although the concepts are a little confusing, hopefully they'll be cleared up as the story progresses.

We shall see!

Persona and kingdom hearts together that's genius

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This is amazing! But I have to say, for others to also enjoy this story, you should really put it in the crossover section between Persona and Kingdom Hearts. Otherwise people who are looking for this story in the crossovers will never find it! But this is really good! I can't wait for the updates!

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