Loved the story line but it seemed like the genius' are already high in EQ. Then Paige's social and communction skills wouldn't be needed. And would only be involved transporting Ralph around?

Interesting take on Toby.

One of the best Scorpion Fiction storylines that I have read!
Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Can't wait to see what you write next!

Gorgeously penned!

This was amazing. How in the world did you come up with this? I find this story touching, heart racing, and wonderful. I had to take multiple breaks just so i wouldn't cry. I love how you've added in a moment with Happy and Toby, and a moment with Walter and Paige. I feel that Toby and Sylvester were the ones that were phased the most. Toby held Walter in his arms and Sylvester kept playing the memory in his head over and over again. I was on the edge of my seat. Good job.

wow. this was the first Scorpion fic i've read and it is fantastic.
I couldn't read it straightforward; i read it off-and-on for about four hours... i had to watch a Disney movie to get my mind away from the darkness.
But good story. Very good.

This made me cry so hard TwT. I tried to hold them back but at the end I couldn't stop them from falling. This was so sad to read!
You did a great job switching characters and ending it with Walter alive. This is going to favorites.
I can't stop crying (seriously)

this isn't really about walter and paige its more about toby :(

Wow. You've beautifully, tragically captured the family we know and love! My favorite part was Happy and Toby coping together.

Dang. That was gooood. More?

Very nicely done! Thank you!

Ha! I loved it! I've become addicted to this show, and while I like all of characters, Walter is by far my favorite. :) I also am a gigantic hurt/comfort junkie, so you combined two things I loved into an awesome story. I hope to see more from you.

Holy hell, this was amazing! This made me sob, smile and everything in between. You are a talented author, and you definitely know your way around words, as well as these characters.

You have a very accurate portrayal of their reactions, and you have done wonders with capturing their thought process, which is a feat when you are writing about geniuses! You have done wonderful work with this piece!

Your plot was also interesting, and kept me hooked throughout the entire story- it had me eagerly awaiting what was next, and kept me guessing!

All in all, awesome work! I can't wait to see what's next from you!

Oh wow... That's really all I can say. This was absolutely amazing. I was not expecting to find such a beautifully written hurt/comfort story on such a new show. You nailed the characterizations fully, the flow is wonderful, there are minimal typos. I was blown away entirely. I must beg you to write more for this show because I am hungry for more. I'm debating writing some myself. But this was truly AMAZING and I thank you for taking the time to write it.

Aww, perfect! I watched this episodes last night (a little late getting onto the Scorpion train, but hey, never too late to start) and I think this is wonderful.