Wow, a real treat. Loved the suspense. A definite page turner. Kenny pulling a gun on both Levi and Erwin was a HOLY S...T moment. Loved it.

Would appreciate a new longer fanfic with just as much or even more suspense.

Awesome short story! 3

it was short but I like it :D glad that this end with happy ending. :3 although it was kinda rushed in the middle part. but it's okay. overall I like it :3

Omg I'm gonna cry this is so beautiful

This ending really seemed rushed. I know there wasn't to much that you could of done with it, but this is a bit much. It actually reminds me of the AOT anime as that was rushed as well. The other three chapters were amazing though, very suspenseful. Good job overall.

Holy bologna!

This story gave me chills from beginning to end. So intense! This was so well written and absolutely addicting! What a great plot and ending!

Btw, all of you attack on titan stories are amazing!

Although it wasn't detailed, the story was quite good. Great work.

this was really sad :"( but it's good Eren found peace at last...

Okay so first.
The story was too short and the ending seemed rushed. You probably should have made previous chapters longer if you were seriously going to end it like this.
Why did Eren sexually harass Levi in the earlier chapters?
Why did he throw a fit when Erwin and Levi finished having sex?
WHY push Erwin in the pool and not Levi (considering he is the son of the man who raped him).
This fic was made awhile ago but there are too many questions left unanswered and for it all to be figured out and solved in the last two chapters makes it rushed.
There could have been more creepy interactions between Eren and Levi as well.
There are just too many things left to the imagination. :/
Great idea, not so good execution.
Overall I would rate it a 3 out of 10

perfect. just perfect

Some shit like this used to happen at my parents when I was a kid... just change the teen boy who was found to see 8 or so year old girl who had gone missing in the 80 but was found until my dad decided to plant a tree in our back yard.

Awesome! It would be cool if you did eren's part of this story.

That was boss. Right there right fucking there and ending fucking awesome! Whoops sorry for the continuous use of the work fuck...It would seem that this is to be blamed on Levi

Thank you. Eruri is a Notp of mine, but this was just utterly wonderfully done.

OH MY GODDDDDDD! Jesus that was suspenseful especially when Kenny pulled a gun on Levi and Erwin. This was very good, Thank you and good job! :)