That was pretty dark but awesome.

Well, that was satisfying. Ming Hua's such a badass.

I don't want to be rude or anything because this story is really good, but Ming-Hua was born without arms.

Very good back story. Also a nice twist on things.

great backstory, and nice attention to detail. you going to write more about his right

Really loving this. Nice background, good personality. It was pleasant to read.

Go Ming Hua, bathe Republic City in their blood. But this is a really good story. My stomach churned at everything Yinrong said and I want him dead. I hope it is suitably gruesome. But Ming has my pity, poor thing, but I'd never say that to her as I enjoy living. I hope you continue this, your writing style flows very well. I can feel Ming Hua's pain and frustration and fear. So electricity can burn my arms off. Now I am suitably horrified and paranoid. I hope you're happy.

Oh god. Oh man. Oh dear. I'm definitely interested

Oh my...

Ming hua, so enigmatic

Poor Ming Hua her life is so harsh but at least she had a mother who understood her. I liked that part when she took care of her mom. It makes Ming Hua seem more human and less like a psycho I wish they would have done that for her in the show. Can't wait until she gets her revenge. Would she kill them? Or do something really sadistic and leave them alive in pain?I also want to see who killed her father and how. When will she meet the red lotus?

Please update soon

I can't wait to finally get to the revenge part. It's very refreshing that her mother supported her decision to do so, and merely warned her to be careful. I really like where this is going.

Wow, I did not see that coming. I love the little world you built for Ming Hua, and more than that - the fact that you even wrote this story. So her arms got electrocuted off? I didn't even know that could happen. It was all pretty interesting, I was anxious to see how she's going to get away from Yan-WRONG. Not the best way for her unfortunately :(

Looking forward to more of this. It would explain why she joined the Red Lotus.

Truly a girl after my own heart the anger and what she does with it. Trouble is acoming to some well deserving bad people!