I love your story :) Your OC isn't overpowered and your writing style is quite nice.

I like your story, I hope you will take it one day. What I like most is the fact that your heroine is not extra badass, too smart, mega strong, super beautiful ... But just as the title of the story says "ordinary". But with a very good sense of direction.
I find that maybe you shoot a bit away her aversion to alcohol, but I like it in the same time. Because with her past, this can be understood, and this can show a weakness she will need to understand and / or overcome.
So hopefully read on.

Tamura needs to chill with her aversion to alcohol. Its ridiculous to take it that far and besides that, she has a chance at a new life.

Please continue this story!

Woohoo... Glad you're still writing this story. Just luv your OC and her interactions with both the Canon charities and your own OC's

Im loving this story so much! I hope you update soon

All the oc are confusing

really like the story please update soon.

Yay!
Now I hope she annoys the crap out of him while sparking serious sexual tension - because what's better than that? :)

Oh shit! Shit just got REAL! She actually insulted him! I'm incredibly excited to see what happens

Heh finally, something updates when I check. Though it is nice to have new reading material every time ya upload due to how long it takes :P

Lovely :)

I absolutely love it! I have to admit I was scared that you were done with this fic. Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more!

Awesome chapter! I feel bad for komamura for being tricked by kenpachi but I can't wait to see how he'll react when she comes back! Can't wait to read the next update when inspiration hits you!

I loved this chapter! Yachiru was so cute! And Komamura was too. He's so sweet to be so protective of Tamura. Kenpatchi is hilarious too! I can't wait to see how their two weeks together turns out! Please update again soon :) because I really want to know what happens next!