This was a well written story. You did a good job of describing BJ's illness and I'm glad that Hawkeye cared for him, and stopped him from killing himself. Suicide never solves anything. You also kept Frank in character. He doesn't care about anyone but himself it is no wonder that he has no friends. I'm also glad that BJ helped Hawkeye to calm down when they were trapped in the supply tent despite the fact that his legs were crushed by a heavy shelf.

i just wanted to say that in the last four days i have read this story at least five times, please write more bj/hawkeye h/c- i love it so much, and not everyone can pull it off without turning it into slash. i love this story so much and it was so well written. if you write another h/c you have one guaranteed reader and i would imagine more than just me. this story is absolutly amazing and i am about to read it again.

-tex

I loved this story and I am glad you didn’t kill of BJ. I was hooked all the way till the end. Great work.

Radar fan

I love this. :)

Rubbish? *RUBBISH?* What the hell are you talking about? This is brilliant!

Yippee great! However, I think your BJ talks a little bit too well, sort of like Charles. He'd probably say: "It hurts like hell" rather than "It hurts badly". Still, very good job!

What are you talking about? *RUBBISH*? You're crazy! That was a spectacular story! Write more mash!

EEP

Yeah dream chapters are good . I had one that was kinda the opposite to ths story hawk instaed of beej.

Hi, You might remember me. I've reviewed this fic before, only back then I was a humble anon. reviewer named Karen. I'm glad to have found it again, and it's just as good as it was the last time I read it. :D You're going on my favorite authors list because of your beautiful M*A*S*H fics. :)

wow, just started the story, great job. Write heaps of mash. All your stories are kewl

I loved this story! It was very convincing - BJ's illness and how you described it. It didn't matter that you didn't have a name looked up an illness because it wasn't needed. PLus the fact that you wrote it in first person POV and that's very hard to stick with sometimes - nice work. Being in his state of mind he wouldn't have really cared what it was wrong - he was too delirous at times to think about it. Great work. Hawkeye and BJ were both very much how i could see them acting in an actual episode if this were an episode.

AW!I've been skimming through some of your fics and just had to stop and say: Cute! I mean, I feel Sorry for BJ, but the interations with him andd Hawk, the plot line, were very angsty and good. : )

This is a great fanfic. I've read it like 3 times. You seem to really know M*A*S*H and the characters as well as writing very well. I hope any fanfics I do are as good as this, but I'm only 14 now, so I think I need a lot more practice. Thanks for the story.

Great fanfic. I think it really captures the friendship Hawk and BJ have. Keep up the good work!

Karen

Nice story. I quite like the end, actually. Well done!