| Reviews for RWBY: A Boy's Take |
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  Courtney chapter 19 . 4/22 Dude please please please please please please please update this story, it's emotional, it's heartwarming, it's comedic, all in all it's AMAZING! You made me feel for the characters which is actually a pretty hard thing to do in the writing world. This is one of the BEST fanfictions that I've read for this series. |
 Cipher32 chapter 3 . 10/9/2019 Kid has a fetish for legs I knew it |
| Bismarck Alexander chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 Hmmm based on what a fan told me about Cinder in regards to my little project, she seems like could develop feelings for Ross but be angry about it. Like, "The price for making me fall for you, is death/severe." OR "I'm in love with you so I must punish you." Basically there is an opportunity to add more to her character like you did with Ross and Yang in a later chapter where vows to be a better sister for Ross. Ahem, with Cinder there vids on YT that claim she 'the worst written character' and probably because she's all about accomplishing her evil plans. And thanks again for helping me out with my project. |
| pliy6 chapter 19 . 7/31/2019 more pls |
| Ato chapter 19 . 7/26/2019 More! |
| LightJakRises chapter 19 . 7/17/2019 Ross X Emerald ;). |
| A bio chapter 19 . 6/17/2019 It hasn't been 50 years...but WHEN'S THE NEX E! |
| N2 chapter 19 . 2/28/2019 I think you should make White Rose the main pairing and make whatever other changes you feel will make it better and please continue the story do not abandon it please. |
| bobtankerman chapter 19 . 12/24/2018 hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... nice |
| bobtankerman chapter 18 . 12/24/2018 whuh uhhhhhhh ok then please continue my writing my guy this is one of my fave fanfics because its got the stuff from you... cool. |
| wow that's really cool chapter 1 . 9/18/2018 Who would win? A group of hardened street thugs or a scythey boi? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2018 Ross and Blake! Also please UPDATE! |
| SwanGod chapter 19 . 8/8/2018 Update! |
| MageTGM chapter 6 . 4/30/2018 nah this ain't too bad i like it. |
| Ushko uzumaki chapter 1 . 10/19/2017 Ross reminds me of Edward elric from fullmetal alchemists because of his height problems |
