Reviews for The Way She Acts
Baconicon chapter 8 . 1/22/2019
It’s refreshing to see a well-made romance story like this one. Great work, and I applaud your great writing.
nahte123456 chapter 8 . 10/17/2018
It occurred to me after seeing this fic again, I read all of it a long time ago, when it first came out, even reviewed a time or two. Never gave a last review though, oh well.
Rereading it, it's still a good little story, it's fun and cute. The writing is a bit stilted in places, probably could have used another look over or something, the dialogue just sounds off in places, but for the most part it's a good little story with 2 of my favorite Smash woman, ad some good sub-plots.
2018almazand chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
I love this and I love you MahNati.
Dominic Almazan chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
This is the first fanfiction I ever read and I liked it. Samus and Palutena should be together as a couple and if they exist and if they invite me for a three way with them, I would say yes
I didn't login chapter 8 . 2/3/2016
13/10 would read more similar fanfics like this, it's just toooooooo cute 3
LegitElizabethWWEFan chapter 8 . 8/27/2015
This was the fanfic that introduced me to your writing, believe it or not! I'm not really into slash or femslash to be perfectly honest. It's not that I despise gay people or anything like that; I've just never really into it. I think WWE fanfics destroyed my ability to enjoy any form of slash. (DO NOT go and search WWE fanfic slash. Just pretend you know what I'm talking about, and move on.)
That being said, I truly enjoyed this fanfic! The "opposites attract" trope is a tad overused for my taste, but using it on Samus x Palutena in this case works perfectly! I enjoyed reading about them becoming a couple, and the resulting impact in has on the mansion. I'm glad it wasn't all sunshine and rainbows because that's unrealistic as hell.
Rob x Lucina x Robin was something I didn't predict until the end of chapter 7, to be honest. I wasn't sure how Robin viewed her relationship with Lucina, but Rob made some excellent points in that chapter. I appreciate him taking Robin's feelings into account because they ARE practically the same person. It only makes sense that he'd do such a thing. Lucina was interesting (in a good way) alone, which I enjoyed as well! Seeing the whole relationship become polygamous actually made me smile. I'm happy it came to that!
Peach was a great addition. I enjoyed seeing her as the voice of reason (of sorts) because Captain Falcon & Marth certainly weren't gonna fall in that category. Captain Falcon was great, but I just wanted to strangle Marth with my bare hands... Or kill him the same way the male Wii Fit Trainer killed him in my fanfic "Gone Away Like JFK"! XD But that's good! It's always a great sign when you can make your readers love or hate a character passionately. It means that you know how to make someone's personality stand out among the others.
I don't really know what else to say other than good job! I hope you write a (F) Robin x Lucina and/or a (M) Robin x Lucina oneshot in the future cause THAT would be cool to read.
Keep up the excellent work, lovely! I hope this review is a good present :D
Infinity Comes To A End chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Could you please go through this story and do some spell-checking? I could do it or you could get a beta.

This has so much potential!
TacoKing23 chapter 8 . 3/18/2015
That ending kind of came out of nowhere; You didn't really give any indication it was coming until it just suddenly happened. Aside from that, I enjoyed the story. Had cute parts, and feelsy parts, and parts where pretty boy Marth was a douche. A good balance of parts.
pomeranian chapter 8 . 3/18/2015
(f)robin/lucina/(m)robin is such a cute ship omg.. samus/palutena is great too!
Makokam chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
RobinxLucinaxRobin did make the most sense in this story. They two Robins are essentially the same person, after all, so if she liked one she'd probably like both.

Maybe you could write a one-shot were Lucina is speaking to them, and going, "Okay, so, where you're from, we're married... And where /you're/ from... You're my Mother?"
"Yes"
"...so where am I from?"
"The future."
Makokam chapter 7 . 2/1/2015
Obviously, they have a threesome.
Makokam chapter 6 . 2/1/2015
The metroid DNA thing was a nice touch. If she keeps sucking energy out of Palutena she just might end up functionally immortal.
And if they break up she'll have to start living like a vampire or die.
Makokam chapter 5 . 2/1/2015
Viridi will be /severely/ missed. She's probably my favorite character from Uprising.

Anyway, since I apparently decided to break my silence, I'd suggest you edit your chapters a little better in the future. Just setting them aside and reading them the next morning will do wonder for catching mistakes.
niigoki chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
Aaaaaah this story was so fun to read, you've really improved your writing a lot Mah! I loved the way it ended, since it was meant to be a fluffy one-shot anyways, nothing better than end in fluff. Also I LOVED how you turned the Robin/Lucina/Rob love triangle sort of thingie into a three way relationship. Few stories do that and it was a great way to work it out I think 3
Anyway, I look forward to your new fic (nyehehehehehe)
Prinplup64 chapter 8 . 1/13/2015
So lucina is not going to choose between the femal and the male!?
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