Reviews for Bring Me Home
Brightness Davar chapter 26 . 6/13
I've been binge reading this for 2 days now and I'm so invested that when it finally came to this i was so sure that the next chapter would be waiting already. But it's not! I know it takes time to write tho, i just wished i had found this when it was done. This is such a cliffhanger to be let on and i don't even know when the next chapter will be...
I loved the whole stroy so far. You really made me root for Elsa and Logan's relationship and even the awkwardness and the fight was just so beautifully done. They really feel like people to me and i love the little details you put in. Like Logan fishing Anna's braid out of the soup.
I've laughed out loud so many times while reading your story. It's very clever and entertaining. You've built the tension between Elsa and Logan as they fell for each other and the whole bandit thing so well. Although there had been a few times where i practically hissed that Elsa or Logan just kill Dag already while they bad the chance. But Elsa isn't a killer and Logan was properly unsettled when Dag just killed that fat dude so i understand why it didn't happen. It's just so frustrating tho! Like when you watch a movie and just warn the idot characters not to go into the forest and they refuse to listen to you.

I'm so so so so excited about how this will all end up. My theory so far is that Dag somehow ended up controlling fire, like a curse or something and that's why he's so obsessed with it. Like Elsa being in control of ice has an effect on her, she can be cold and distant. So the same must be true for Dag who is literally being burned alive from the inside out and that's why he's going insane.

I've also got a feeling that Elsa will be forced to choose between Logan and Anna... And I'm dreading and looking forward to that happening.
I don't know if you're the happily ever after type, but i seriously hope you are. It'll just kill me if Logan dies... Or even Anna... Or, heaven forbid, Elsa dies...

I hope you're plagued by inspiration so strongly that you'll finish this stroy in record time! Like a fever dream or something. Anyway good luck with writing this! You're doing brilliantly!
leiabearr chapter 26 . 6/9
I am most excited about the sequel. I mean, what? Lol wonderfully written. I found you on archive and was delighted to see there's more posted here. Your writing demands the attention of it's audience, and congratulations for that. Cant wait for these final chapters.
Guest chapter 26 . 5/27
One of my favorite fanfics, I hope you are well.
Guest chapter 26 . 4/27
so I’m not a very avid fan fiction reader, but this is incredible. I am seriously blown away— good luck writing and I really really hope you’re planning on finishing this (gotta stay sane in quarantine, right?)
StarFlame7 chapter 26 . 3/25
hey there
just stopping by . will you continue this story? it is so good and was left in such a cliffhanger . I hope you continue
Guest chapter 26 . 2/12
Poor Olaf 'Come any closer and you're going into the fire place' - I hope Logan gets to throw Dag into a fire place
Guest chapter 26 . 2/12
I will continue to wait for an update for this even if it kills me. I love it too much XD
Guest chapter 26 . 2/8
Amazing story, please continue!
Guest chapter 26 . 1/26
Everything about this story is perfect; you're incredible and I am excited to see where this goes...
Guest chapter 26 . 1/12
Shhhheeeiiiitt can't wait to see how this all goes down
Guest chapter 26 . 1/7
Beautiful story, I hope that things are going good for you and I hope that you'll finish writing this story, it's been one hell of a journey and I would love to see how you end this. Take care.
MortifiedFry chapter 26 . 1/7
Seriuosly, Elsa? You couldn't fix that hole in 2 years?!

Anyway, I noticed you've been editing the chapters lately, which gives me some hope there will be an ending? No pushing for an update, just wondering. It's such a good story, it gives me feels and I cant eat or sleep.

I'm not a huge fan of Elsa in a relationship stories because it's hard to make it work with such a complicated character, but this one is one of those cases where it feels OK because it wasn't rushed for plot-sake but they actually took the time to learn about each other, which feels good. And my baby deserves to feel cared for and loved by someone who is not blood related. I mean, Logan is an asshole, but not a lost cause. Even if they end up together-together, or end up just being secret lovers, or they decide to just move on with their lives because of Elsa's station makes things impossible, well, it will feel right. Sometimes shit just doesn't go as we want and hearts get broken, and while time doesn't heal anything, it makes it easier to carry the memories and bear the pain.

Thank you for this amazing story. In the mean time I will go and find another one that makes me feel just as excited and gives me feels that wont let me focus on anything - if I can find something like this I'd be so lucky, or maybe not, 'cause I need food and sleep.

Take care.
MortifiedFry chapter 25 . 1/7
It just broke my heart into dust, thanks .
MortifiedFry chapter 24 . 1/6
He’s Shocked(tm).
MortifiedFry chapter 18 . 1/6
I lived that you used the word “Mormor”, thank you. 3
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