Are you going to actually write those last chapters or is the over view all your fans get? Please, continue this!

I was so happy that u update this story, but I,m also disappointed as well... I thought u came back to finish,.. I really didn't enjoy myself, but I also understand u... Do what u must... Do u know, this story isn't on the story list, telling that u update, how I know u update is because I look on my favorite story.

pleaseeee update this storyyyy pls pls pls

OMG Please don't forget about this or drop it please please update!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON?
Or like r u either on hiatus or dropping this? I'd hate for u to drop this, please don't. It's amazing, no exaggeration. I really love ur style of writing, it's really easy to understand and it like flows really quite smoothly.
Please update soon, I'm sure all of us out there r waiting for another (few) chapters.

This is very interesting considering it's part 2 of DL. I look forward to future updates. If any. ... o.o I would really appreciate it if you respond with a hiatus notice or a drop or something. I wouldn't want to get my hopes up. This is actually a very interesting piece of work. You are doing a fantastic job, and your writing style is something to admire. :)

I can't wait for more

Please update soon okay

Nuuuuu plz update

Please update. I've spent all day reading part one and this one it's like 3:00 am now. This story is so well written.

holy shit I really need an update
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Pleeeeasssseee update! Also, when is the danger line manga going to start up again? Can't wait!

Thank you soooo much for updating! And not only one chapter but two!
I think I've said it before, maybe when I was reading Danger line for the second time and before you even started this sequel, or maybe I haven't wrote it as a comment ( I remember writing you a PM back then and asking you about where I can find the story to download on my computer), I'm not sure. But I'll say it just in case.
I have a lot of favourite ships in a lot of fandoms, but Danger line is the only chaptered fanfic I've read five times, the second being immediately after the first one. Together with this sequel (that I hadn't expected you to do at all but I'm so sooo happy you're writing) it gets the absolute first place in my favourite fanfics of all times, regardless fandoms, ships, genre etc.
I don't have enough words in my poor english vocabulary to describe how grateful I am you spent (and keep spending) so much time on this fic and uploaded it here for us to read. I may say that after five years of being obsessed with reading fanfiction, after staying up all night just so I can read what's gonna happen next in a certain story, and after going back to reread some of my previously favourite stories from a few years back just to find that they're not as good as my poor english made them be back then, EVERY TIME I read something of yours I love it even more than the last time. All your stories are so worth the time they take to read.
So, if you read all of this shit I wrote, I'm sorry for wasting your time but I just got so overwhelmed with happiness that had to say it. Also sorry for all the typos I probably made..
Update soon and keep up with the great work!

I believe I left a review already but gosh darn it! Please please update! I loved danger line! And I absolutely adore natural born killer it's soooo good! Please update soon!

Also , your other stories are absolutely amazing too. I haven't read a single one that wasn't absolutely fantastic! All of your stories are perfect! Please continue writing master pieces!

OH MY GOD PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE this is so amazing and I love domestic ereri! Jesus fuck finally Levi told him what was going on! Seriously! Anyway, you are a goddess please don't stop!