I've loved this story from the start! Lovely chapter, I really like all the different emotions/feelings you've shown throughout the entirety of this story. xx

Aww one problem gets sorted out and another one pops up. I'm glad he now doesn't blame himself for Jeff's death, it obviously really helped having Dixie tell him she doesn't blame him, as Jeff's wife and all. I like the start of Ethan having panic attacks, I hope this continues for a bit. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. :) xx

Loving this so much. I honestly think that Ethan wouldn't get away with not having of anxieties! You're doing a great job. Can't wait for more!

Nice take on the funeral. I'm really enjoying this and can't wait for more!

Aww Ethan thinks everybody blames him, I really hope Cal can make him see the truth soon, otherwise his health isn't going to improve at all if he keeps thinking he's responsible for Jeff's death. I wasn't expecting Lilly to be the one to shout at him, I know she was concerned and all but I don't think it was her place to berate him. He was upset enough already. And now he thinks she did it because she blames him, poor Ethan. I wonder what everyone else will think when they find out how Ethan is feeling. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how all this unfolds and what Cal's plan of action is. :) xx

Aww. I love this story, it is very sweet (but sometimes spicy ;) story. I love it. Keep up the great work my friend I know you can. - Cale xx

I'm glad you've incorporated last night's episode in to this chapter, I think it was a fitting tribute to Jeff, especially with the radio's. I loved when Cal called Lofty a moron. Poor Ethan, I laughed, last night, when he hid behind a magazine. Looking forward to more. x

Another great chapter! You're so talented and I really can't wait for more x

Another brilliant chapter! I'm loving how more Cal/Ethan stories are being written. Can't wait for more x

This is so beautiful! I love the last sentence too and I can't wait for more from you. x

Wow. This is beautiful. And exactly what I need after last Saturday. I just can't get the episode out of my head! I loved this chapter, and you picked up on what I've been thinking too. I really hope he doesn't but knowing Ethan he will blame himself for the crash. Oh my poor baby! :( I love their brotherly relationship so much, so you can probably guess how happy this chapter has made me :)

Aww Ethan seeing Jeff in his hallucinatory state due to his fever must have been a shock to Cal. It was probably Jeff he hallucinated because he'd just learnt of his death, otherwise it could have been anyone, like his mother. I hope Ethan gets better and continues to allow Cal in and help him through this, keeps talking to his brother and doesn't shut him out when Cal wants to and needs to help him through this. Right now Cal is the one person Ethan needs above anyone else and the one person who should be there for him at all times during his recovery. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great work and I'm so happy you decided to continue this story. :) xxx

This is really good well done. One thing I would say would be to start a new line every time someone speaks. It just makes it that little easier to read :) other than that its great. Update soon.

I loved this. I agree with you about the Cal/Ethan scenes in the episode they were great! It was good to see a deeper Cal. The scene in the hospital room when he told Ethan he loved him just about made me into a sobbing wreck, even down to when he nearly took his hand but just couldn't quite do it! I guess they'll be back to normal in a couple of weeks!
Anyway great job with this.

Completely agree with Born lucky being a fantastic episode and hopefully we'll keep getting more brotherly love scenes in the next episode (and the rest of the series too)! This is just sweet and lovely, I'm glad it kept bugging you!