What happens next? I want to know what happens. Please.

I like the premise of this. I've only read this page, but I look forward to what's in store already. Good intro.

Please make more. I want to know what happens to the girl. And does Guren's dad take her in as part of their family. I hope that they do. I hope so.

I hope you update soon I want to know what happened next

Please update!

Please continue dis, it's sad but still~

:3

at least you post I mean even im still stuck but im trying

I like this chapter. It may have been short but it was a nice read. I'm happy you have gotten over your writer's block. Or at least partially over it. I like how you make Ceylon feel a little guilty about asking Yuuki the question about her parents, it made a nice humane touch to the story. It was nice to read this after a very, very long wait. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Sincerely, with kind words, your friend, IDRF.

Make one more

Skitty: Oh! oh! She can some how get a core brick and go on adventures on ...Oh crap I forgot the name of the Tenkai Planet, But that place!
Henrey: Thats real spesific(note the sarcasim)
Skitty:(throws a brick at him) shut it henrey.

I loved the chapter I think to have given have a sister is adorable

I think that may be later on in the story she either does somthing that prevents them from going to Quarton or she some how becomes trapped on Quarton and Guren has to save her.

Please make more

When are you going to update?! This sounds really interesting