Honestly such a beautiful story and the smut written so well. Love the relationship between the two and thought it was developed well. Awkward and so relatable from all parts of the work throughout. Keep it up!

This story illustrates such a great relationship dynamic, and they're both so in character. It was seriously super cute!

I can't begin to describe how amazing this was!

holy hell im in my feels thank you this was amazing

This is the millionth time I've read this story and I still live it so much. This is in my opinion the best thing you've ever written. I'm absolutely in love.

Wow I loved this so much. I'd only read a few of your one shots before but this was just great. A nice length to be a satisfying read, but not take the whole afternoon, or the whole week as the case may be. The way you did their relationship was so solid, and a case I'd love to point to when talking about how characters can change and flex in AUs but still be so entirely in character. The smut was really quality and I just appreciated all of the checking in, continuous consent and all that. I'd of course love seeing some one shots in this universe - I don't know if any are around in your one shot dumping grounds, or on tumblr, but I'm about to be on the look out because I really adored this.

so
That was great
You're great
I'm so happy this was written
I'm like smiling like an idiot right now and so happy I stumbled on this.
Super awesome job! Keep up the amazing work

Found this on tumblr because I was looking for more fics and I THOUGHT for sure I've read everything on ff and ao3, so I scrolled through tumblr and LOOK AT THAT.
I found this wonderful, beautifully-written and slice-of-life-ish read that gives me all the feels and JEEZUS. I needed to fan myself quite a bit with the smut part.
I love how you portrayed SoMa's friendship. I loved their dynamic. I had to laugh at the part where their fights were catatrosphic - Soul walks backward flipping Maka off and Maka throws a book at him - because I could totally see that happening. I also liked how you made Maka this girl that cared for her studies but still not totally inexperienced because that's kind of how I see Maka's character. All in all, great, perfecto, magnifique and I've read this a couple of times over - THAT's how much I enjoyed it.

hey, great story!
a pleasure to read : )
and the sex scene, leading up to it, during it and afterwards was great!
it didn't feel like i was reading a porno, this is because it was so real! the way you went about it was so mature and enjoyable : ) thank you

in all honesty this is the absolute best mature fanfiction i have ever read. the relationship you made and how you presented it was an art form in its self i swear. and the sex scene was so true to what truly happens between two people who genuinely care for each other and especially in that age range. it was a real pleasure to read it.

Wow brave and bold maka. I like it. She is always brave and bold though. :)

Beautifully written.

This was so beautiful I could cry. You made it sweet and poetic but also got their banter and some awkwardness that offset it perfectly and made it more realistic. Thank you for writing this.

Also, omg "like some kind of ridiculously handsome meerkat" has to be the best phrase I've ever read.

Gaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh I loved it

Amazingly Awesome!

This was so cute!
I like how it was awkward in a way - but you still delivered the cute, fluffy side of it.
It was pretty in character for an AU, too!