Reviews for TMNT: Beat It
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2018
Whenever she says she's gonna get a beer. I could tell which turtle said what. Its so funny!
K4l4p4 chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
So glad I found your fanfics. Love them!
Letostag chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
Love this so much!
AshleyHamato chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
I think I might have read the story they were referring to. However, there are more than a few stories on this site about a TMNT mating season, by multiple authors, so it's a fairly common idea. I didn't read anything that led me to believe you plagiarized anything, just perhaps a similar idea that other folks have had and your take on it. Nothing wrong with that :)
NyxLied chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
Lover it! I applaud how well you handled all characters' depiction in one single room. It was funny and well-written. April is one lucky bitch for receiving the attention of these four beautiful turtles ;)
Little Kunai chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
BWAHAHAHAHAHA
theeleventyfivethousandfangirl chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Hahah I love this so much, Mikeeey XD
MsMarvelDuckie chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
Squee! Love mating season ficcies. This was so much fun- in a sadistically cruel way, of course. Poor guys- they just had no idea how to handle being around her in that state. Gotta feel sorry of em, eh?
JunjouRomanticafortheWinxoxo chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
Wowwwww! Give me a minute to gather my thoughts. Okay, first things first, well done! This was absolutely amazing! I can tell that you worked really really hard on this fanfic, and it really shows. The way you managed to keep every single character IN CHARACTER, is just amazing! In too many fics that I have read, I have seen characters slip out of character too much, and it just ruined the illusion. But with this fic, you've managed to keep every character in character and really keep the illusion. I've read a few "mating season" fics regarding our fave boys, but this is the first one I've read where the boys really fight for April's affections. It was really interesting seeing how hard they tried to not lose control and scare April off. It makes me think of how animals with mating seasons have to work really hard to attract a mate. It can't be easy. It was interesting seeing the struggle. You've really done a good job with that.

In terms of "plagiarism", I don't see how the idea of the turtles going through their mating season can be plagiarised. That idea is open for all, seeing as it makes sense that this is something that they probably went through in every adaptation. Of course how they act to it will vary from verse to verse and fanfic to fanfic. I wouldn't beat yourself up about it, even though I doubt you did. XD I'm a little late in finding this fanfic and I couldn't help but notice that little notice that you put at the beginning. Anyway, I think you did good and I doubt your story is even remotely close to the supposed "plagiarised" story. Oh god, I'm rambling. Okay, I just wanted to commend you for your perfect grammar, because I know it must have been hell on earth to proofread this. By keeping your grammar in check, you've managed to keep the story flowing. Excellent job, lovely story! I hope there is a future follow up story to this, because I would love to see you push things a bit. Hehe
Captain chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
This is amazing! Well written and you kept everyone in character! Other 'turtles I their meeting season' fics always have the turtles very rape-y. But this is amazing! Well done, dear!
sailor super-starS chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
this story was great i couldnt stop laughing, and what april said to Leo was pricless! XD
Shinigami-Mercury chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
*choking with laughter in a corner*

10/10 would read again. Seriously man, this is SO GOOD. :D
horsemens chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
I think you really captured how each of the turtles would feel towards April in this season; and I feel ya on the too many characters in one scene. I especially loved it when April had to bang on the table and everyone jumped.
Eveleech chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
...O_O Ummmmmmmm...
Derra chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
XD good one, the conversation betwen Splinter and April was hilarious.
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