Dude this was really good, wish it continued!

yay

y la continuacion?

uhhh... AHHHHH! hm, okay. now, look at what we have here. a GOOD story. long well written, and the characters are spot on. now look at the update date. dont wanna seem annoying or rude BUT WHY THE HECK IS THIS STORY JUST SITTING HERE WHEN IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL? *breath* please finish it.

AMAZING... THIS. IS. BEATIFUL!

Awesome I love it! :D

Yet another fic I didn't expect to like. Sure it's sad, but it's enjoyable, and a salient "what if?" scenario.

AWESOME STORY, but

I need
MMMOOOAAARRRRRR!MMOOOAARRR

This is a great story! You seriously need to continue this, as your characterization was spot on! None seemed OOC so kudos to you! I hope for more from this story!

Long chapter alert! Whoo! I didn't realize that before I looked at the scroll bar. Anyway, good story. I don't really ship Bill and Dipper (if not obvious), but Dipper being a ghost could make a nice plot. Maybe he could get out of town for whatever crazy reason.

Hoping for an update!

This is incredible! Such a compelling narrative and deeply emotional moments. Really can't wait to see how this continues :) xxx

good story, please make more.

Please Continue :D

Is this going to have a shounen ai does it?

You are an amazing writer. I love how you write so much in one chapter not many people do that but I love when they do. This is a great story please continue.