I love your story sir. I also love that game, have it regestered! great story, I WANT MORE!

Ah . .. Flame Spikes, best mass anti-personal attack around.

Should be a shock to a vampire and a demon, friendship is a very alien concept to them.

I'll be lookinh foreword to how they react next chapter.

incompetent strangers."

She doesn't know that yet. Then again, when you see things as lunch meat, you tend not to have much respect for them.

So Silver is a day walker?

Tristan may not have the experince to notice, but the dwarf and the warlock might to tell what Silver is.

I'm not sure who'd I'd be more afraid to travel with.

Demons, who play by rules(well some), or vampires who you know play by none.

Quite the conflict.

I didn't quite follow Cindred's logic about the holy symbol not working on him.

Anyway, nice perception and you didn't sugar coat the the cold hard fact that demons and vampires are both predators.

Vampires by the way are chaotic evil, that means they don't work well with groups, so rouge vampires aren't as unheard of as you think.

Did Silver have any family before she was infected with unlife (let's not sugar coat that either, it is a disease)?

Good job. And ironically with matterial like Realmz, one HAS to do a good job, because one must be truely inspired by what they read with Realmz, rather than enchanted with eye and ear candy like in other games.

:-)

Great stuff all around! Can't wait for what's coming next! ;-)

Fabulous job, as usual! Cindred and Sliver's little "conversation" made me giggle, I must admit. And Tristan's really growing on me, really. He's got that "adorable little kid" thing going for him. So cute! It's been too long since I've played Realmz, really...*gives Haiku-boy a whack for good measure* Err. Anyway. This was, of course, well done, though there were a few stray commas roaming about. Then again, I should be one to talk about rampant commas. o_O

Oh, but your characterizations are utterly *brilliant!* I'm really starting to form attachments to Cindred and Sliver. Especially Sliver. (What is it with vampires and sarcasm, anyway?) And you have "dear old" Haiku Boy-err, Haikur, I meant Haikur-down to a nub. Oh boy, won't he be fun! ;-) One nitpick though-I could've sworn that Bywater's guardsmen wear blue. Though maybe that's Mountain View's...argh, so confusing! _

Wow! That was really good and very entertaining - makes me want more! (Please?) ;-)

Oooh! I *like* Cindred...such sarcasm. Heehee. And Solestri...so long as he doesn't have the dwarven holy water with him. You promise he doesn't, right? ...Err, anyway. Let's try a sane review now, 'kay? Or not. Anyway. This has a *really* good start, and it stays true to the scenario. I look forward to reading more!