Loved the story. Those lemon scene where very juicy. I am bug fan of Gray x Lucky. I think they belong together instead of natsu.

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love this pairing so much and you are an incredibly gifted writer :)

Congratulations on the new baby!You did a great job on the new chapter,I can't wait for the next!

Congratulations on the baby and thanks for updating! Loved it!

I really wanna read this! Ahhhhhhh!

I didn't realize I was reading the last chapter til I got to the end, but I have to say, it was an amazing ending! I really loved the journey these three made and how they got together. I was shocked when I saw it updated. :D But in a great way! ! ! Thank you so much for updating! Also, congrats on the new addition to your family! I hope you're doing well! And yes! Love the shout out for gratsulu week! ! ! That's awesome! I can't wait to see what people come up with! :D Thank you again for making this beautiful story! It's incredible! Stay happy and healthy! :D And happy writing!

This needs Natsu f*ck!ng Lisanna and Gray taking on Ultear too. That's the only thing missing from this NaLu story, a setup for an orgy!

*clears throat* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! The way the guild reacted and what they did with the house was just beautiful. And that little addition for Happy was too adorable. but you know, Mira's right. It's time for some lugratsu babies! And Rae, I hope you'll be participating in Lugratsu week. I'm in the middle of writing a short story for it that I think you'll just love to pieces.

yo Rae, you need to reupload the chapter it came through as formatting

I absolutely love their proposal! This story is incredible and I hope you continue it one day. Thank you for writing it!

This chapter was incredible! I think my favorite part was when Natsu growled for Gray to stop teasing. :P

I've reread this story a few times but I just realized I only left a comment on the first chapter! This story deserves more feedback because it's amazing! ! ! Thank you so much for writing this!

OMGS! THIS IS AMAZING. Can you please, please, PLEASE update soon?

That was pretty awesome