This story ks pretty good,I didn't find any typos,maybe there were some typos,but I didn't remember seeing it,also one question,so Kaneki rape Touka and ate her legs? Maybe its just me,but fromcwhat I have read that is the only thing came to my head,correct me if I am wronf,poor Touka get combo of Rape and Eaten, yeah,also let me follow and fav it,Will be here in next update! :D

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Ayahina AND touken? Sign me up this is greAT

Gonna follow the story.
I hated the part where you raped
Y u do dis

Thank you so mutch for writing such a good fic! :D it was *un vrais coup-de-coeur* 3 i really can't wait for you to update :) i wish you luck on your studies as well :*

More sex with Ken and Touka. Also Ayato when he joins the other army I want him to be like super in charge (like he is in the manga/anime) where he's a general of sorts. Hinami is super cute here so she has to be the point where Touka and Ken meet in their love.

I feel you girl! T.T real life has drained me of all my energy and time. I haven't write. Anything since a whole month! Damn university. Especially since it's the end of the year and I'm stacked with essays! But I'm glad you'll try to for ideas for the story. Well I'm not sure what you had originally planned, but well how about start with Touka's current position? She's Kaneki's captive, right? And knowing her she'll probably refuse to stay caged forever, maybe she'll try to escape to reunite with her brother? And Kaneki... Well he probably feels like the biggest ass put there for what he did. Not sure if he'll try to apologise (though luck) or gives her cooling off time, wonders what to do with Touka. Who obviously wouldn't want to see them. Are there any conflicts Kaneki is dealing with? Aside from his kakuja and the fact that he... Raped the daughter of the people who helped him.

I think the flash backs should wait for a while, unless it's crucial part of the plot, which will reveal more things later on as more puzzle pieces are put together. Also are the flashbacks, dreams? Or memories? Then you also have to come up with a way for Touka and Kaneki to bread that thick barrier that's between them, which will be super hard. Touka is probably scarred for life thanks to Kaneki, but she's putting up a big face because of her pride. Then there's Ayato whose on a rescue mission to get his sister back. So much you can go any direction, what other characters do you want to bring in.
Make sure nothing is too rushed, try to have them retain some of their characters. Yadayadayada.

I hope this is enough to inspire you. :) I don't know why, but my suggestions tend to helps a lot of people.

New chapter ! Please

This just made everything confusing but nonetheless it was an amazing chapter just maybe go a little more into the apologizing because this just felt way too random

This chapter feels a bit out of place. It's interesting to know what happened to Kaneki, but it feels so random and fast. One moment Touka gets an apology from Kaneki and next we have a flashback chapter? Aren't we supposed to wait a few chapters for character development?

Also, why was he wandering outside and alone without any guards?

I think you need to add more detail to the chapters are the reader will become very confused.

Yaaayyy! Finally an update! 3 and it was awesome! It's ok to feel lazy at times but but as long as you don't give up tho this! also, giiiiiirl don't you ever say again that your fanfic is no good or it's not worth it! I told you in my previous review that it's hard to find worth-reading long Touken stories and this one is one of them! please don't think like that! Also I bet my money that the little girl was Hinami! the story is pretty similar to the main story! ;) ;)

Great another chapter it's been a while

YOU NEED TO CONTINUE HOLY FUCK YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW EXCITED I AM

ahhhh this seems very interesting still a lil bit terrified of when touka got violated though but i think i'll get over it...anyway great work i hope there'll be more soon

Omg I loved this story !
Please update soon!
I hope you'll make the chapters longer