Hi!
Amazingly GREAT story, here! Please don't tell me that you stopped writing this, because a couple of readers took offense at something you wrote?! There are a LOT of 'trolls' out there, who get butt hurt at the drop of a hat; they have nothing better to do, in their bored, tiny little lives and live to crap on their betters! Please ignore them or turn on the review filter? 99% of them are too cowardly to leave a nasty review, using their own login!
Anyhoo, you said that it was too graphic: I know you've read Robst's "Harry Crow"; well, the scene where Bellatrix kills the Potter family and especially the murder of the little girl, were pretty graphic and I didn't hear word one of objections being raised!
My guess is that the trolls decided to single you out for your obviously gay characters, but because they didn't want to *seem* like the blatantly homophobic morons that they are; they chose to target something else!
Please, I see that you've been writing for other fandoms, since you last worked on this, and you really seemed to know where this story was going, so I don't think you can plead 'missing muse' in this case...
This is a truly unique and truly wonderful piece of writing; won't you please consider coming back and continuing/completing it?
I'm not a fan of the other fandoms you write for, but I do promise I'll praise this story to the skies: It's just that GOOD!
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us: You're undeserving readers!
Take care!
MelJ :D

Or the fact they spell Valhalla the way you have them arranged

I’m loving this so far. What a wonderful family little Harry has.

update please!

A very interesting story so far! Looking forwards to reading more!

I'm know at this point it isn't going to happen, but I'd love to read more of this. Your writing is brilliantly engaging and your story well thout out.

are you going to update

I'm enjoying this story so far, and hope you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

It's so sad to see a really good, but abandoned, story, I'd love this to continue at some point!

Shame you have abandoned this. It was really a unique premise and exceedingly well written.

No Harry isn't an OC at all different hair, no scar different name and the biggest joke of all Ravenclaw! the house of stupid smart people who only care for them selves who would run from any and all fights unless they have no choice. yeah way to go there! thanks for wasting my time.

yeah that is all he needs is one more set of people lying to him and trying to control his destiny. instead of coming clean so he know what he is facing. for not wanting him to become an OC you sure have done one hell of a job of making him one. no black hair no scar that has a piece of Riddles soul in it. funny how you even named the "father" liar just spelled different is all.

Absolutely stupendous story! Like the different twists and turns in the plot.
Hope to read more soon.

Awesome going! post soon

great story hope your still writing this one :)