This is one of my favorite fanfictions and I’m sure it’s too late to you to come back to it but I wanted to let you know anyway

Pathetic loser trolls with no accounts commenting. This story is good. Y'all think y'all could do better? Grow your trolls.

Great story!

THIS IS A FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT FANFICTION THIS FUKIN SUCKS AND YOU SHOULD GO TO HELL FOR WRITING THIS FUKIN TRASH

WhatTheF***:your oc is an abhorrent, disgusting s*** and this is a f*** horrible story and ruined the movie and the book. Tolkien would be so f*** disgusted if he read this piece of s***.

WhatTheFuck:your oc is an abhorrent, disgusting s*** and this is a f*** horrible story and ruined the movie and the book. Tolkien would be so f*** disgusted if he read this piece of s***.

your oc is an abhorrent, disgusting slut and this is a fucking horrible story and ruined the movie and the book. Tolkien would be so fucking disgusted if he read this piece of shite.

Alright, this is officially my favourite of your chapters! Or not :) because seriously, I still reread most of WTFB regularly, and Nerys is amazing, and the Faire companion piece is glorious... OK, I officially don't know which is my favourite but this one... Ohhhh...

Where to start... Ridla! OMG definitely an amazing OC. So far it's just one chapter but she already is a fully developed character. I loved everything about her! I especially like her pinching her cheeks to protect her friend. That tells so much! She is pushing boundaries, challenging what she doesn't approve of but still cares for her friends even if she disapproves of their life style. There is a bit of cruelty in her, she is spoilt, but there is will, and cheek, and I love how she knows everyone likes her boobs :P

I really like how you wrote the other two women. They stood out for me. Just a few sentences, but so precise! Absolutely glorious!

When you happen to write those two prompts I sent you I hope at least one of them is from Ridla's POV (hopefully the second one :P). I just really want to see what's in her head.

Altogether, this chapter was FUN! And HOT! So hot!

You know how squirmish I'm re:shag and smut these days, but this one made me hot and bothered in a good way :) I'm going to go 'talk' to A. now ;)

Thank you! I've been waiting for this one for months : ) I love how sexually free dwarven society allows women to be - except if you're Fili's girl! Poor Yuanir : ( I'd love a "study in frustration"-type piece from her pov.

Finally! Someone agrees with me!
and woooow, what naughty dwarrowdams

bring it on

Honey, the only way this could get more unorthodox, is if they started bringing in llivestock.

Mmmmmmercy!

That was a great chapter, very well written and letting us take part in Kili's and Reese's thoughts and emotions. Very different from the first one. While the first chapter was quite graphic and physical (liked it, too, in a way :)) this one really captured their love for each other and let the reader have a glimpse into their feelings. Nice insight into your realm of dwarven culture and tradition. I find it very compelling that the dwarves, who are so sexually open-minded, still bond for life and seek to do so as an important life goal. But it makes sense, considering the importance of having children and securing their upbringing in dwarven society, as there are so few females. Loved the vows and her confession, that it was *love* at first sight. You made me curious about how this chapter might have turned out had you written it ''as a "kinky wild event" :D. Maybe there could be an alternative version of the wedding night. Don't know wether I would like it but surely it would be interesting.

Maybe a prompt could see Fili having his own pleasure, seeing his brother having his. Or maybe a few members of the council like thorin and wren having a moment.

wooooh, glad I found this one. Nicely done.

hmmmm, wonder what the observers had to go do after that li'l performance. hehehee.

Kili deserved some fluff for his wedding, and it was surprisingly sweet. Especially considering how awkward it would be to have so many witnesses. Loved your take on dwarven mating customs.