Great job with their personalities; I think they're spot on!
I laughed my ass off by the way, really love this story.

;_; your mind... 10/10

this was amazing. the fact that... he did it on purpose as oppsed to some spell or something made me sigh with happiness and now i think i can go to sleep in peace

He’s so sneaky

i loooooove your Nalu! warm and fuzzy and funny :)

La narracion estuvo bien , no tube ningun problema en seguir la historia, me encantaria una historia que cuente como Natsu se fue enamorando de Lucy y como le hiso sentir, muy buena historia sigue haci 3

ohhhh myyy, totallyy cutee i want moreeeeee

This was sooo cute! Absolutely love it!

Found this story a few minutes ago , it’s so funny and great ,I love the concept of this fanfic! I can’t wait to read more of your works!

Just cause you mentioned that comment trend, I'll bite.
But overall the story was cute, especially the little extended ending.

It was sweet with just enough "spice". ; )

I love your stories, but what amazes me most is your ability to end them so well. Conclusions are so hard and yet you throw out awesomeness at the end like it's nothing! Contagious stripping, bahahaha.

So Natsu can actually be smart. Huh. Well, no complaints if Nalu happens! Great story!

*INHALES* AAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHH
This was too cute!

Alright I've taken the time to write a review and say this. I did not read the entire end Author note yet or maybe never.

Ha ha Nice story