Reviews for Irresponsible
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/17/2018
Oh, yes, this is great! And in almost any sane village, a man raising a child alone, who works hard, who doesn't drink or beat his wife-well, he's marriage bait. Surprised he hasn't been surrounded by widows and daughters with no other prospect of husbands by now.

But yes, he deserves Belle, and Belle deserves him (your Belle, anyway).
No Fate 1990 chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
This story was lol funny and yet alittle sad
Invader Kathy Starsky chapter 1 . 6/13/2017
I love this. I hope a sequel is made where Bae, who married Emma (who was raised in her birth realm) and had Henry, confronts Milah about her failure as a mother and mocks her by saying how she'll never know her grandson and how Henry will never know who Milah is.
Foxcat93 chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
Good story! I liked how Rumple told off Milah and the twist at the end with the healer being Belle!
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
Awesome work. Keep it up.
MarieQuiteContrarie chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
I liked this story and it is a great example of what can go wrong when we neglect the people we love. It was good to see Rumple standing up to Milah and letting her pursue her own life-he and Bae are better off without her. And I liked the touch of Belle being the healer who helped Baelfire. Well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Rumple should have "gotten his house in order" in the show. The whole "burden of being the town cowards wife" thing doesn't excuse Milah's actions in any way, especially for ditching her son the way she did.
Sony Boy chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Go Rumple!
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Beautiful! yes Milah's Behavior could've gotten Bae hurt or killed ! Glad Bae's going to be ok. Is Belle a magic healer here Or just herbs? I think you're officially my favorite once write defiantly my fav Rumbelle writer
Kathryn Claire O'Connor chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
This is awesome!:)
sudoku chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
I like what you did here. Yes, should just kick Milah off earlier. I cringed when in the show Milah left Bae unattended with open fire. Not to mention there could be werewolves or ogres around. Also glad that his hand will heal. At least Belle appreciated both Rumple and Bae.
Hook and Milah should just go away together and never come back in the show.
A Sky Bison chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
This was really awesome! I like how you portrayed Milah and the way Rumpel stand up for his child! And the last part ikwisksjxmx (hints of Rumbelle)
NicoleMuenchSeidel chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
Sorry, you just screwed up...now there's another story that I want more of. Doh! Yeah, I know you've already got a lot of other stories to keep up with. *pout* This was great! Really anything could have happened to Baelfire while that selfish woman left him alone. And I love Rumple telling her just where to get off. Someday, if you ever get the time, I would like to know what happens from this point with Rumple and Belle. I kind of like from a literary stand point, that Belle has no family, thus I could imagine a story where Rumple and Belle come together trying to create a new family from their broken pieces.
Anyway, very well done!
mikabronxgirl chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
Milah got what she deserved. There is no way I could ever feel sorry for someone who dug her own grave. Despite what she and the village believed Rum was no coward. Yes his crippled and lame but he still worked to provide food, clothes and shelter. He could have become a drunk spending all his time drinking in the Pub.
Maraberg chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
Are you going to write a follow up with Belle and Rumplestiltskin getting together? I loved this story and would love to read more!
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