come on. i hoped to read more chapter.

I'm sorry for your loss. I definitely understand how you feel. A little over two years ago now, my closest grandpa passed away and it is still very hard some days and especially during the holidays and during his and my birthdays as well as the 14th of January, which was when he passed away two years ago.

I'm really liking the story so far and am excited to see what you have in mind for the story!

I hope that you are planning to severely bash the civilian and the elder councils, including that rotten root.

I know the loss of a family member, especially if you are close to.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Love it! Keep going!

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Last chapter you said he didn't remember tsume name now she is his mother figure...I find it kinda confusing. Although its probably a mistake you should clear it up

Interesting chapter, but what happened to Ino. I still can not imagine her father not kicking the crap out of those that hurt her and Naruto.

When to we get to see Kushina, and find out why she was not there for Naruto? Was she lied to, forced to leave, leave on her own, does she even love him at all?

Well this is interesting. I hope Tsume joins the harem over Hana. I just always liked Tsume over Hana there just always feel like there is more there to her to be filled out then her. But Hana could work as well since they are close to their age. I do have to say that what is up with the 3rd. There is noway there is NOTHING he can do. I mean the beat and hung a child and left him there for who knows how long. And he does NOTHING and wont do anything. I have to say that is really fucked up. I think the 3rd wants to see Naruto hurt. I mean there is noway the leader of the village could have THAT little of power he can't even protect of child. And if that is true he needs to step down right now because he is not fit to be a leader. I also notice Naruto didn't seem to think about Ino at call seeing how she got really hurt trying to help him. I hope she crosses his mind soon seeing how she was left knocked out in the trash. It would also be interesting if Naruto start to work part time in Ino's flower shop as well. It would give them a way to stay closer and get closer over the years.

Anyway interesting story, can't wait to see more

sarutobi can't do anything?
bullshit, he is the hokage, konoha dictator. civilian mob injured a child near to death. it is treason. He has all right to kill them or at best punishing them to life prison. and i hope you plan punishing them.

Great story so far

Overall good story, looking forward to the next chapter.

really ''i'm the kyuubi i'm the reason that you life is so shitty'' and naruto says ''ok i'm going to free you eventough i don't know you at all'' you should let them get to know eachother before you make naruto trust her let her explain her the reason of her attack and what happened that night and who his parents were

can't wait to see what happens next