THIS WAS FANTASTIC. I love seeing everyday interactions like this, and the thing between Vance and Ethan was hilarious. Poor Jimmy has to put up with so much!

This is one of the awesomest things i've ever read xD

Ha, this was a funny read. I enjoyed it.

I love it! It's hard to find just a slice-of-life funny Bully story of a typical day at Bullworth. The characters are very in character and I loved Vance and Ethan's little argument. Hahaha nice reference to Ethan's ninja obsession and Vance's pirate suit! And poor Algie and Pedro. Jimmy's reaction is priceless XD. And the ending with Petey and Gary was funny too. I guess Jimmy had enough of the guys' weirdness. Great story! The writing is flawless and smooth as well :D

This is perfect.

You have a very nice writing style! It's actually quite relieving to be able to read a fan fiction, not to mention a BULLY fan fiction, and get to enjoy it. Typically I'm sifting through typos, inconsistent story content, and just all around terrible writing.

You have a very nice flow. The information in the story is very well presented and understandable.

"Laundry room" doesn't need to be hyphenated. Neither does "teenagerhood."

[to this school (and that was saying something)- he pulled...] The hyphen after the parentheses is unnecessary.

[Constantanious was stubborn: He...] At this sentence, you should just use a period to end the sentence. The colon is misused.

This was pretty good! And, funny, too. Thanks for the read! Happy writing!

I really enjoy reading your Bully one-shots, I would love to see more of them from you in the future!

-Azure

Omg i love this story so much xD
Very amusing and I love the characters very believable.