Oh my gawd. If you make this into a multi chapter fic that follows Ruby working for cinder I swear to Morgan freeman that I will write a review for all of your fics.

Great story but pointless if it ends hear with it completed

Pretty good- I definitely enjoyed it. If you ever decide to write more that would be super cool.

Hot.
That's the first word that came to mind after the final line
I await more funsies, a-rav.
-Skij

It says this story is complete but pls continue it

aww, i sure hope this isn't a one-shot! it's a really great start; you've got me wanting to read on. the plot has potential.

Loved it!

Hmm, interesting. I'll keep reading

nice!