Hi Charlotte .this was the best finchel fic I have read in awile .i have to admit you Kelly and Carol are my favourite finchel writers .i have some other writers I really like as well .all finchel type fics I mess say lol. Bev . I must say I felt sad that this fic was ending.

Hi Charlotte .you know you are an excellent writer. Have you ever thought about writing non fiction stories .i would most deffinately read one if you did .but I do really enjoy your finchel fics .this one stay with me is exceptional .thanks . Bev .

Hi Charlotte . This has to be one of the best finchel fics ever .wow .you really got completely into this .i love it .cant wait till your next fic . Bev.

Poor Rachel did not see that door coming . I guess she was too busy watching Finn .lol. I am really liking this . Bev .

Hi Charlotte . I can't believe I have not read this finchel fic of yours .i am glad I started to read your fan fics over again .the other three I have read before ,but not this one .it looks quite interesting so far .thanks .

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Loved this finchel story I had not seen before , thank you !
Finchel forever !x

This is honestly so very good, I am in love. You just need to practice and say their conversation out loud (to yourself or a friend, maybe) for it to be less fake and feel more natural. You dialogue is interesting, but it doesn't flow. They say gigantic lines, but never take a breath. Perhaps adding some action would make it more natural.

This is wonderful, though. I am very happy to have found this :)

I'm in love with this story. So good

You scared the crap out of me. Twice. Injury and the draft. Not nice. But this is so so good

This was so sweet

loved it, still sad to see it end cant wait to read your new story _

I love the end line!

awesome ending to an amazing story can't wait to read more of ur finchel stories

Perfect! Looking forward to your next story. Thanks so much.