Reviews for The Bitterness of Mortality
Hawaiichick chapter 11 . 5/13/2018
It is so heartwarming that Legolas has so many people who love him. I didn’t mention it before, but I love your character Baelorn. He is one if a kind. :) I also have to show some love for how wonderful Glorfindel is. He can do no wrong in my eyes. :)

I am so happy I found this story. It was such a wild ride if a story. The highs and lows of emotions. This was such a fun read! And you had me teary eyed again at the end...knowing that Elrond and Elros is forever separated. :(
Hawaiichick chapter 10 . 5/12/2018
My heart aches knowing that Elrond will have to experience what Thranduil went through thinking that he would never see his son again; not only with Aragorn but with Arwen as well. :(

I’m glad I had some tissues nearby because this story is such a tear jerker. You have such a talent for writing emotional and beautiful scenes. When Thranduil wanted to see the stars with his son one last time...yeah I had tears and snot running down my face. :(
Hawaiichick chapter 9 . 5/12/2018
Yes! They’re getting somewhere. Save Legolas! I love that deep bond of friendship between Aragorn and Legolas. You show it in subtle ways, such as when Aragorn doesn't want to leave his friend’s side.
Hawaiichick chapter 8 . 5/12/2018
Loved getting thrat insight to Legolas’ birth. I can’t help but smile at the thought that Thranduil instantly became attached to Legolas the moment he was born.
Hawaiichick chapter 7 . 5/12/2018
Oh the feels! I don’t want Elrond and Thranduil give up hope in saving Legolas!
Hawaiichick chapter 6 . 5/12/2018
I love getting a look inside Legolas’ turmoil and struggle and to see his love and loyalty to his ada.
Hawaiichick chapter 5 . 5/12/2018
This story gets better and better with every chapter. It’s so very addicting!
Hawaiichick chapter 4 . 5/12/2018
They’re rescued! And we know a bit more about what happened to Legolas and why.
Hawaiichick chapter 2 . 5/12/2018
Poor Legolas abd Aragorn. They can’t seem to get a break. You did an amazing job showing Thranduil’s despair. I felt the anguish and confusion from him so vividly.
Hawaiichick chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
Wow, what a start! Legolas & Aragorn in a bit of trouble, Thranduil fearing the worse and Elrond’s nightmare,
AndurilofTolkien chapter 11 . 2/23/2017
aw cute :)
Ladies Limwen and Aranel chapter 1 . 9/15/2016
Hello Karri! I just wanted to say we read this a while ago... And then i read it agian lol this story is the reason we love fanfiction so much! Honestly If we didn't run into this story we might not love to read and write fanfictions so much.. So in a way we thank you!:) The Thranduil and Legolas father/son relationship is awesome. And Elrond raceing to save Legolas was so cool! I have this picture in my head of when Thranduil takes Legolas outside to look at the stars one last time and it is so awesome! We love this story! Bravo mellon nin! Have a wonderful day!
L&A
Ryder Thorne chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Nice chapter! I really like this story so far. Legolas sounded just like my friend did when he got a concussion. Do you write from experience cause it sounds really accurate!
Uruviel Phoenix chapter 12 . 8/15/2015
I was moved to tears so many times whilst reading this. A wonderful story of love between Father & Son. Thank you.
marypoppin chapter 12 . 6/22/2015
i really love your fic.
Legolas and Elrohir were so sweet.
thank
27 | Page 1 2 Next »