Reviews for Hero 108: A New Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really nice story. The pacing is a bit fast, but it's still fun to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder which kings were still loyal. Jumpy and Husky are most likely loyal, but I wonder about the others. |
![]() ![]() I love the story you made |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you do season 2 of the story |
![]() ![]() I had a cool idea. I read up on chi energy and found it to be very similar to harmonic energy (maybe?), and chi energy can be corrupted with dark chi energy. So what if highroller tried to corrupt Lin Chung with chaotic energy to do twin master's bidding and uses Liliac as a way to force him to do so? Just a thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! NEW CHAPERT! uh...ehi, wait a minute...Uncle High Roller?! (spits out all the water glass) WTF?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason, I feel the odd need to say: OH MY GOD! on this particular chapter. First because Lady Green is one of my favourite characters, and second, because I couldn't have seen THIS coming. The other pairings worked out fine, in my opinion, this one just threw me off a bit. The story so far is awesome, love the pace that it's going at. Not too fast but not too slow. Just can't see any proper character development yet...maybe a bit more will come up in the following chapters. Will any of the former heroes of Big Green appear? |
![]() ![]() I am slowly becoming addicted to this story. It lacks fluidity now and then, but the pacing is always right, and I think it is one of the best Hero: 108 stories currently written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY IT'S HERE! THANKSSSS! |