Yeah...I like Anna and Hans more than Anna and Kristoff.

Yeah, Hans would've had both Anna and the kingdom of Arendelle if only he had done things right in canon.

I believe that Hans and Anna would've been a greater couple if Hans hadn't wanted to marry her for the kingdom of Arendelle.

It felt like Hans was used as nothing at all but an excuse to bring the two "sisters" back together, didn't it?

this is so good i love it

This was actually kind of sweet. It seems like Hans actually does care for Anna in this story, especially with the ending. Great job!

It would’ve been much more interesting if Anna was actually jealous of Elsa herself alongside her cool ice, snow magical powers, the royal ruling couple of Aren-delle favored Elsa over Anna and Elsa was actually being trained to help them conquer any other kingdoms in canon. That would’ve shown how siblings are jealous of each other, because that’s realistic, but that you should love them and accept them for who they are no matter what, shouldn't you? That would’ve been a really strong, powerful message.

Anna still doesn't like Elsa at all. First of all, she was still always, constantly, being, feeling easily overshadowed by her older ice, snow magical, muggle-born sister, Elsa the next heiress to the throne of Aren-delle for past years ago! Second of all, everybody/else usually finds her older magical, muggle-born sister, Elsa's ice, snow magical powers cool and lastly, her parents obviously favor Elsa over her much to Anna's irritation too. She wants to be out of Elsa's shadow, not being stuck in Elsa's shadow at all so Anna resents her magical, muggle-born older sister, Elsa and hates her sister, Elsa too. Elsa tries to bond with her little, younger baby sister but Anna refuses to accept Elsa's apologies. Anna rejects Elsa as an older sister the same way everybody else usually rejects Anna in favor of Elsa. Anna's actually jealous of Elsa because not only does she have everybody's/else's love and admiration for her cool ice, snow magical powers alongside herself, but Elsa's also always the most all time favorite too, and furthermore, any/other boys/men and girls/women think she's cool enough to hang out with!

"Oh, BELIEVE me...I'd love to prove how wrong you are but...sadly, I haven't the time to do that at all, so I'll leave you to my "faithful" Second-In-Command." Hovered down and pressed a button and a door opened...and, in stormed an angry, furious familiar young strawberry blonde woman who looked very much angrier and more furious than ever. Elsa was stunned as she was shocked beyond in pure belief before she became utterly distraught and heartbroken. "A-ANNA?!" But Anna was silent but she just coldly glared at Elsa rudely in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury and anger without saying anything nor anything else to her at all. "Who ELSE would've been there for Anna if you're easily favored by all the others so far? Huh? You REALLY should've been better off as a one and only single, sibling-less, sister-less child anyway, Elsa ever since you're easily the most all time favorite...you never ever even know if your "little younger baby sister" is better off living her whole entire life the way she wants without you anyway." Words stung at Elsa's heart like jagged daggers. Then glanced at Anna one last time. "Take care of all of them, especially some no good for nothing former "perfect" big older sister friend of yours." Anna nodded silently without arguing. Flew away, leaving Anna alone with all the others. Then Elsa finally approached Anna as she was utterly heartbroken for real to see Anna who was nothing nor nothing else but full of rage and hatred. "NO! ELSA, DON'T!" One of them shouted in a warning tone. "Yeah, Elsa, please don't let her get away with breaking your heart again with her mean words." One of the others shouted in a warning tone. But Elsa didn't hear any of them so she ignored their warnings. "Oh, Anna! Why, Anna...WHY?! Why are you doing this? Do you hate me?" Elsa sobbed as she asked her sister. Anna still just hatefully glared at her older sister coldly in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury and anger unsympathetically as she rudely spat and scowled in disgust before she finally spoke as she violently ranted, raved, raged and screamed in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury, anger vehemently at last. "WHY?...WHY NOT?! YOU WERE ALWAYS THE MOST ALL TIME PERFECT PRINCESS AND QUEEN OF AREN-DELLE, SOME BETTER PRINCESS SISTER OF AREN-DELLE, THE MOST ALL TIME FAVORITE IN OUR FAMILY, ALWAYS THE ALL TIME BEST, ESPECIALLY ALWAYS THE BETTER ONE MOSTLY." Elsa stared in pure fright, shock, horror as she was still utterly heartbroken and entirely distraught to see her sister, Anna who was now already, utterly still filled with full of burning pure rage, hatred and violence as Anna was still utterly fueled by her pure rage, hate/hatred, fury and anger as Anna still violently ranted. "WHO WAS THE REAL HEIRESS TO THE WHOLE ENTIRE THRONE OF AREN-DELLE, YOU! WHO WAS ALWAYS THE WHOLE ENTIRE CENTER OF ATTENTION WHO GETS ALL THE ATTENTION AND ALL THE OTHER ATTENTION MORE THAN ME, YOU! WHO GOT ALL THE DEFENDERS AND ALL THE OTHER DEFENDERS EVERY TIME AND EVERY OTHER TIME I HURTFULLY MAKE YOU CRY, YOU! WHO HAS THE MOST REAL FRIENDS WHO GIVE YOU ALL THE COMFORTS AND ALL THE OTHER COMFORTS EVERY TIME AND EVERY OTHER TIME I EMOTIONALLY HURT YOU, YOU! WHOM DOES EVERYBODY AND EVERYBODY ELSE USUALLY GOES EASY ON, YOU! WHOSE SIDE EVERYBODY AND EVERYBODY ELSE ALWAYS RATHER TAKE, YOURS! WHO WAS FOUND LESS INSUFFERABLE, LESS OBNOXIOUS BY ALL THE OTHERS, YOU! WHO GOT ALL THE DIGNITIES AND ALL THE OTHER DIGNITIES, YOU! WHO WAS SEEN AS THE REAL VICTIM OF THIS LOVE HATE RELATIONSHIP OF OURS, YOU! WHO WAS EASIER TO SYMPATHIZE WITH, YOU! WHO WAS SMARTER THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS PRETTIER THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS FOUND BETTER THAN ME BY ALL THE OTHERS, YOU! WHO WAS THE MOST ALL TIME SPECIAL ONE, YOU! WHO WAS THE MOST ALL TIME COOLEST WHO WAS FOUND COOLER THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS THE MOST ALL TIME PREFERABLE, MOST FAVORABLE WHO MORE PREFERABLE, MORE FAVORABLE THAN ME, YOU! WHO'S ALWAYS THE MOST ALL TIME FAVORITE PRINCESS OF AREN-DELLE, YOU! AND, WHO'S JUST SOME PERFECT PRINCESS, QUEENLY SISTER FRIEND?!" Elsa was silently frightened of Anna's pure rage and hatred which it entirely broke Elsa's heart. "Uhhh-" "YOU!" Elsa collapsed down in real tears of guilt as she was sill sobbing and crying. "Oh, Anna!" "Elsa!" They all cried in pure concern but they all turned to glare at Anna for making Elsa cry again. "Now look what you did to her!" "Yeah! Way to go, Anna, you made your sister cry again." "You think you can get away with making Elsa cry but you're not, Princess Anna!" Then Anna rudely glared back at all the others and then she coldly glared back down at her sobbing sister unsympathetically. "YOU GOT EVERYTHING AND EVERYTHING ELSE, ELSA...I HAD NOTHING NOR NOTHING ELSE. I could never compete with you, no matter how hard I tried. They all care about how you really feel but nobody nor nobody else ever even cares about how I feel, our parents ignored me. Everybody's against me all because of you! I could never ever even be the queen of Aren-delle at all as long as you're alive in Aren-delle. You have no idea how I feel about being compared to you, do you? No you do not." Elsa burst into tears again. "Oh, A-Anna,...I'm sorry. I never ever even-" But Anna rudely cut her off. "KNEW! Of course you didn't. YOU were too busy letting everybody and everybody else healing you, especially that broken heart of yours only just to punish me for hurting you. You were too busy being "perfect" to notice."Then Anna stormed away. "But, my new friends, especially my new older sister understand me unlike all the others who don't so easily. They're my new family, now." Elsa was more heartbroken than ever. "Anna, PLEASE...this isn't right. This isn't you." Anna stopped and then she glared back at her sister...and ranted violently. "Who are you to say what's me and what's not me?...I just don't care. I couldn't care less." Anna turned to storm off away from all of them. "Anna, please come back." Elsa sobbed in pure distraught.

"Oh, BELIEVE me...I'd love to prove how wrong you are but...sadly, I haven't the time to do that, so I'll leave you to my "faithful" Second-In-Command." Hovered down and pressed a button and a door opened...and the one who walked in was none other than only just a furious young familiar auburn haired man who looked very much angrier and more furious than ever. He was another real true horn headed diclonius now and no longer complete ordinary. All of the twelve older princely brothers of the Southern Isles stunned as they were shocked beyond in pure belief before they said breathlessly in disbelief. "H-HANS!" But Hans was utterly silent but he just coldly glared at all of his twelve big older brothers in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury and anger without saying anything nor anything else to any of them at all. "Who ELSE would've been there for Hans if none of you are so far? Huh? You REALLY should've been better off as twelve and only princes of the Southern Isles anyway, boys ever since you all were the most all time favorites...you never ever even know if your "little younger baby brother" is better off living his whole entire life the way he wants without any of you princes of the Southern Isles anyway." Then glanced at Hans one last time. "Take care of all of them, especially some no good for nothing former "perfect" big older brothers of yours." Hans nodded silently. Flew away, leaving Hans alone with all the others. Then all of his twelve big older brothers finally approached Hans as they were still utterly shocked for real to see Hans who was nothing nor nothing else but filled with full of burning rage and hatred with burning passion. "GUYS! NO! DON'T!" One of them shouted in a warning tone. "Yeah, guys, please be careful." One of the others shouted in a warning tone. But none of the brothers of the Southern Isles heard any of them so they all ignored their warnings. "Hans! Why, Hans...WHY?! Why are you doing this? Do you hate us? Did we do something wrong to you?" The first oldest brother of the Southern Isles asked his youngest brother. Hans still just hatefully glared at all of his older brothers coldly in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury and anger unsympathetically as he bitterly spat and scowled in disgust before he finally spoke as he violently ranted, raved, raged and screamed in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury, anger vehemently at last. "WHY?...WHY NOT?! YOU WERE ALL ALWAYS THE MOST ALL TIME PERFECT PRINCES AND KINGS OF THE SOUTHERN ISLES, SOME BETTER PRINCELY BROTHERS OR KINGS SISTER OF THE SOUTHERN ISLES, THE MOST ALL TIME FAVORITES IN OUR FAMILY, ALWAYS THE ALL TIME BEST, ESPECIALLY ALWAYS THE BETTER ONE MOSTLY." All of Hans's twelve big older brothers still stared in shock as they were all still utterly stunned to see their youngest brother, Hans who was now already, utterly still filled with full of burning pure rage, hatred and violence with burning passion as Hans was still utterly fueled by her pure rage, hate/hatred, fury and anger as Hans still violently ranted. "WHO WERE THE REAL HEIRS TO THE WHOLE ENTIRE THRONE OF THE SOUTHERN ISLES, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALWAYS THE WHOLE ENTIRE CENTER OF ATTENTION WHO GET ALL THE ATTENTION AND ALL THE OTHER ATTENTION MORE THAN ME, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALWAYS UNDER THE SPOTLIGHT MORE THAN ME, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALL FOUND MORE IMPORTANT ONE THAN ME, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALL SMARTER THAN ME, ALL OF YOU! WHO WAS PRETTIER THAN ME, YOU! WHO DO ALL THE OTHERS INCLUDING OUR PARENTS COMPARE ME TO, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALL THE MOST ALL TIME SPECIAL ONES, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE THE MOST ALL TIME COOLEST WHO WERE ALL FOUND COOLER THAN ME, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALL THE MOST ALL TIME PREFERABLE, MOST FAVORABLE WHO MORE PREFERABLE, MORE FAVORABLE THAN ME, ALL OF YOU! WHO WERE ALWAYS THE MOST ALL TIME FAVORITE, MOST ALL TIME PREFERABLE PRINCES OF THE SOUTHERN ISLES, ALL OF YOU! AND, WHO ARE ALL JUST SOME PERFECT PRINCELY BROTHER FRIENDS?!" All of his twelve big older brothers were still shocked at Hans's pure rage and hatred which it made all of them feel guilty for ignoring their youngest brother. "Uhhh-" "ALL OF YOU!" "Hans!" "YOU GOT EVERYTHING AND EVERYTHING ELSE, BOYS...I HAD NOTHING NOR NOTHING ELSE AT ALL. I could never compete with any of you, no matter how hard I tried. They all care about all the twelve of you but nobody nor nobody else ever even cares about me at all, everybody and everybody else me prefers and favors all of you over me! I could never ever even be the king of the Southern Isles at all as long as you're all in the Southern Isles. None of you have any idea how I feel about being compared to all of you, do you? No you do not." "H-Hans,...we're all sorry. None of us ever even-" But Hans cut all of them off. "KNEW! Of course you didn't. YOU were all too busy busy being "perfect" to notice, weren't you? But, my new friends, especially my new older brothers understand me unlike all of you, our parents and anybody else who compare me to all of the twelve of you. They're my new family, now." "Hans,...this isn't right. This isn't you at all, is it?"

"Oh, BELIEVE me...I'd love to prove how wrong you are but...sadly, I haven't the time to do that, so I'll leave you to my "faithful" Second-In-Command." Hovered down and pressed a button and a door opened...and the one who stormed in was none other than only just an angry, furious young familiar strawberry blonde woman who looked very much angrier and more furious than ever. Elsa was stunned as she was shocked beyond in pure belief before she became utterly distraught and heartbroken. "A-ANNA?!" Anna was silent but she just coldly glared at Elsa rudely in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury and anger without saying anything nor anything else to her at all. "Who ELSE would've been there for Anna if you weren't at all so far? Huh? You REALLY should've been better off as a one and only single, sibling-less, sister-less child anyway, Elsa ever since you're the most all time favorite...you never ever even know if your "little younger baby sister" is better off living her whole entire life the way she wants without you anyway." Words stung at Elsa's heart like jagged daggers. Then glanced at Anna one last time. "Take care of all of them, especially some no good for nothing former "perfect" big older sister friend of yours." Anna nodded silently without arguing. Flew away, leaving Anna alone with all the others. Then Elsa finally approached Anna as she was utterly heartbroken for real to see Anna who was nothing nor nothing else but full of rage and hatred. "NO! ELSA, DON'T!" One of them shouted in a warning tone. "Yeah, Elsa, please don't let her get away with breaking your heart again with her mean words." One of the others shouted in a warning tone. But Elsa didn't hear any of them so she ignored their warnings. "Oh, Anna! Why, Anna...WHY?! Why are you doing this? Do you hate me?" Elsa sobbed as she asked her sister. Anna still just hatefully glared at her older sister coldly in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury and anger unsympathetically as she rudely spat and scowled in disgust before she finally spoke as she violently ranted, raved, raged and screamed in pure rage, hatred, disgust, fury, anger vehemently at last. "WHY?...WHY NOT?! YOU WERE ALWAYS THE MOST ALL TIME PERFECT PRINCESS AND QUEEN OF AREN-DELLE, SOME BETTER PRINCESS SISTER OF AREN-DELLE, THE MOST ALL TIME FAVORITE IN OUR FAMILY, ALWAYS THE ALL TIME BEST, ESPECIALLY ALWAYS THE BETTER ONE MOSTLY." Elsa stared in pure fright, shock, horror as she was still utterly heartbroken and entirely distraught to see her sister, Anna who was now already, utterly still filled with full of burning pure rage, hatred and violence as Anna was still utterly fueled by her pure rage, hate/hatred, fury and anger as Anna still violently ranted. "WHO WAS THE REAL HEIRESS TO THE WHOLE ENTIRE THRONE OF AREN-DELLE, YOU! WHO WAS ALWAYS UNDER THE WHOLE ENTIRE SPOTLIGHT MORE THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS THE WHOLE ENTIRE CENTER OF ATTENTION WHO GETS ALL THE ATTENTION AND ALL THE OTHER ATTENTION MORE THAN ME, YOU! WHO GOT ALL THE DEFENDERS AND ALL THE OTHER DEFENDERS EVERY TIME I MAKE YOU CRY, YOU! WHO HAS THE MOST REAL FRIENDS WHO GIVE YOU ALL THE COMFORTS AND ALL THE OTHER COMFORTS EVERY TIME I EMOTIONALLY HURT YOU, YOU! WHOM DOES EVERYBODY AND EVERYBODY ELSE USUALLY GOES EASY ON, YOU! WHOSE SIDE EVERYBODY AND EVERYBODY ELSE ALWAYS RATHER TAKE, YOURS! WHO WAS FOUND LESS INSUFFERABLE AND LESS OBNOXIOUS BY ALL THE OTHERS, YOU! WHO GOT ALL THE DIGNITIES AND ALL THE OTHER DIGNITIES, YOU! WHO WAS SEEN AS THE REAL VICTIM OF THIS LOVE HATE RELATIONSHIP OF OURS, YOU! WHO WAS EASIER TO SYMPATHIZE WITH, YOU! WHO WAS SMARTER THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS PRETTIER THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS FOUND BETTER THAN ME BY ALL THE OTHERS, YOU! WHO WAS THE MOST ALL TIME SPECIAL ONE, YOU! WHO WAS THE MOST ALL TIME COOLEST WHO WAS FOUND COOLER THAN ME, YOU! WHO WAS THE MOST ALL TIME PREFERABLE, MOST FAVORABLE WHO MORE PREFERABLE, MORE FAVORABLE THAN ME, YOU! WHO'S ALWAYS THE MOST ALL TIME FAVORITE PRINCESS OF AREN-DELLE, YOU! AND, WHO'S JUST SOME PERFECT PRINCESS, QUEENLY SISTER FRIEND?!" Elsa was silently frightened of Anna's pure rage and hatred which it entirely broke Elsa's heart but she was guilty for shutting her out. "Uhhh-" "YOU!" Elsa collapsed down in real tears of guilt as she was sill sobbing and crying. "Oh, Anna!" "Elsa!" They all cried in pure concern but they all turned to glare at Anna for making Elsa cry again. "Now look what you did to her!" "Yeah! Way to go, Anna, you made your sister cry again." "You think you can get away with making Elsa cry but you're not, Princess Anna!" Then Anna rudely glared back at all the others and then she coldly glared back down at her sobbing sister unsympathetically. "YOU GOT EVERYTHING AND EVERYTHING ELSE, ELSA...I HAD NOTHING NOR NOTHING ELSE. I could never compete with you, no matter how hard I tried. They all care about how you really feel but nobody nor nobody else ever even cares about how I feel, our parents ignored me. Everybody's against me all because of you! I could never ever even be the queen of Aren-delle at all as long as you're alive in Aren-delle. You have no idea how I feel about being compared to you, do you? No you do not." Elsa burst into tears again. "Oh, A-Anna,...I'm sorry. I never ever even-" But Anna rudely cut her off. "KNEW! Of course you didn't. YOU were too busy letting everybody and everybody else healing you, especially that broken heart of yours only just to spite me for hurting you. You were too busy being "perfect" to notice."Then Anna stormed away. "But, my new friends, especially my new older sister understand me unlike all the others who don't so easily. They're my new family, now." Elsa was more heartbroken than ever. "Anna, PLEASE...this isn't right. This isn't you." Anna stopped and then she glared back at her sister...and ranted violently. "Who are you to say what's me and what's not me?...I just don't care. I couldn't care less." Anna turned to storm off away from all of them. "Anna, please come back." Elsa sobbed in pure distraught but Anna just rudely ignored her coldly.

love it! bravo!

Girl keep writing

This story deserves way more than just 3 reviews. It's amazing! You got the characters right, and truthfully I'd love to see this story continued. You have such a great writing style, it would be amazing to see this chapter develop into a plot line, where we can see adorable ginger hansanna babies. Hehe ;-)

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