I'M SORRY BUT SHOWER THOUGHTS WITH ASTRID-

Dont worry, the chapter was great, the smut was short but well writhing, I hope that you continue with this story soon, thanks.

well, I can tell you that not suck. LOL

So far this story is good.

Well that was good, you said that Astrid is 18 and Hiccup is 19?

well this look interesting, and good for the first chapter.

I like the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter!

This is me..."Yay new chapter lemme read this now at work"...*Nosebleed*
Coworker: Hey you ok?
Me: PERFECTLY FINE! *Runs away*

All fine. No reason visable to be embarrassed.
All fine Hiccstrid smut.
-thumbs up-

Holy fuck you're still active! I'm so glad that you are still with us, and I must say that the return was HOT! Keep it up, I love this! P.S., i do hope that Astrid has birth control or some shiet heh

That was great! Good job! Can't wait for more

OMG I loved the Hiccstrid smut so much, I actually got horny reading it I'm embarrassed to say.
Update more please.

Update more

I love it please write a knew chap

Good job with the plot devolopement. Get the good...no great...better spectacular...I give up trying to say how your fanfic is, just keep doing what you like and have fun. :D