Absoutely love this story, your characterisations, the emotions everything is superb, I feel really drawn into the tale, can't wait to see what happens next!

Amazing story!

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Aw so cute

I love it

WOW kmf! This little story was so cool! You write so well, it's incredible. I love how you reflect on the characters' thoughts and feelings, you're very good at that. I encourage you to keep writing, because you are very talented.

Take care,

Cassio :)

I loved it. It kept up into the same lines as the first chapter. You have a knack for bringing out the tears and tissues. Sometimes we readers need these types of weepy stories. Don't tell my husband I said that! I'll never live it down! Keep writing and I'll keep reading; along with everyone else. My thanks.

This story is so touching! I actually had tears in my eyes when I read the ending. I am about to read the next chapter. Fiction like this is , in my opinion, good for the soul ( and heart!). Please continue to write.

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this was a hot ass story , even though it was short and...hot! lol

yuo should have wrote more cuz it's great

Nice oneshot. Cute and sweet. It made me wonder clear to the end if InuYasha was going to figure out what was happening. Keep up the good work.

I thought the story was really should keep writing.

fantastic

-sniffle- GREAT story. I love InuxKag stories. Yep. And you did this one well. This story and another one of yours is on my fave list and you are on my favorite author list. Great story and I was wrapped around it all morning